secretjellyfish
Hey love :) I just read your story "We don't talk anymore" and left some comments full of constructive criticism...please don't hate me for some of the things I said :) I just wanted to help as much as I could
secretjellyfish
@jasminethejay you're welcome! if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask me...
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jasminethejay
@secretjellyfish Thanks for the feedback and it's okay, a writer needs actual good feedback anyway. I think I'm going to rewrite it because of your very helpful criticism!:)
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