lodemil

U should write replies like:
          "Hey", Caspar said.
          "Hey", Joe replied. 
          But i love the story. It was just kinda confusing and messy. So it was difficult to read. Love you. Update soon. U are a guy?
          U could be my Internet boyfriend. Please?

lodemil

The first part of chapter 2 is confusing but part 2 is more readable
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