jayjay33

If you think its worth pursuing to the end I wanted to write a bit about Louisa and Alex after their marriage  but this time they will be more or less background characters and the previous background characters in the story will be at the fore so let me know what you think

jayjay33

If you think its worth pursuing to the end I wanted to write a bit about Louisa and Alex after their marriage  but this time they will be more or less background characters and the previous background characters in the story will be at the fore so let me know what you think

jayjay33

I want to introduce you to a blurb of my new story a spin of from no love for Louisa
          The Folly of Fergus
            Slightly disillusioned and bored with flaunting society’s norms of Late, Fergus Marchant resorts to turning to find comfort in alcohol to get through his days  But the arrival of his parents back in London, along with their circle of friends, that include the enigmatic Ameila Hanson, and her brother who have taken under their wing a young female  Maletto protege  Miss Charlotte  Bosworth daughter of Lord Bosworth who scandalised the upper echelons Portuguese society by marrying a black woman that left him ostracised. 
           Charlotte's mother dies of typhoid fever when she was still a child of 4  her father much later when she was 16 
          
          Now almost in her twenties, The Hansons come across Charlotte when they are visiting Portugal    and after realising she is surviving a lonely life in her fathers Mansion on what sizable fortune was left to her, and shunned from both sides of society and culture because of her background, They find her bright and  well learned, and of an intellectual mind  Ameila decides it can not go to waste, so she encourages Charlotte to see the world and not hide away as something shameful   insisting she should become her travelling companion whilst she is introduced into London society, and  also into the rakish company of Fergus Merchant, whose interest is piqued  by this dark skinned beauty, which has all the gossiping tongues wagging  and looked at with  askance,  he  suddenly finds a new  prey worth pursuing. 
          
           But he soon finds  Miss Bosworth is no simpering maid who is going to fall at his feet, which makes her even more of a challenge, can he obtain the unobtainable?  And what lengths will he go to to get it in a bid to cause further scandal to the family name.

jayjay33

ok I have a new story in the works its really different from any of my other stories as it is a little more dark and twisted but I found myself intrigued to write it down as the main characters have a very complex relationship that I have never explored before so now and I am daring myself to explore it and see where it goes and take you on the ride with me, anyway I have done  the first few chapters and it is a rough draft so sorry for the grammer mistakes ect

Laurensden19

@jayjay33 yaaaayyyyy new story. I literally read all you stories and totally love them❤️ i can't wait to read this one.....so excited!
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jayjay33

Just  to let those followers on here still  who have read The Somerton Man I have been going over it and looking back on it there are parts of it, mostly in the middle I want to rewrite and change now.  I was just in such a hurry at the time I was writing it to actually get to the end  because it had been a long time getting it to that point I  felt I didn't flesh out Daniel and Eleanor's characters properly which I am trying to address now,  especially Daniel trying to make him less of a blackguard  and unfeeling even though he is still a bit pathetic hehe.  so I will be posting up the new rewritten chapters soon if anyone is interested in reading it still

mishapatail

Hi, wanted to ask do you think you’ll continue writing characters from Tears of A Clown? My fav 2 books that you’ve written, Mouse and TOAC ❤️ 

jayjay33

@mishapatail  hi i have to say I loved writing those books and creating those characters especially  Ricardo and Melanie  and a few times an idea has floated through my head to make a story on Carlos and the new business venture the family embarked on. But  the inspiration for it never really took hold in my head to make it work in written word  yet,  but you never know it might come better to me sometime in the future so I would say it might be a possibility
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jayjay33

I am not sure if  VarishmaVu1 is still around but just wanted to give a heads up I am getting round to doing a sequel of the Bandido's wife called the Bandido's widow now that I have got the main male character a lot clearer in my head.  I am starting on it now and I have two chapters done so far I am pleased with how its turning out and quite excited,  so I can hopefully post  it up soon on wattpad