Skyrocket9000
do you reckon you can read my kph story and give me some feedback and ideas???
I've recently got writers block for short periods of time and I need a jolt of inspiration to get me back up and running.
Also your story is amazing keep up the good work, Sky
jaylemaster
hmmm, maybe try adding more descriptors of what's happening around Ali so that your readers can imagine it more clearly. and a huge thing i've learned writing Amazonite is instead of saying how a character is feeling, show it. for example, instead of writing, "she was nervous under his intense gaze." try something like, "she fidgeting with her sleeves and shifted her weight between her feet under his intense gaze."