jazzyg99
Sorry for the delay on the book Detention with Coach D. Been focusing on school lately. I'll try to update soon. If you guys have any ideas or what you want to happen next, let me know!
jazzyg99
shortyalilbaddie
Can u plz update your book Detention with Coach D plzzzzzzzzz
IAM-Brooklyn
Okay so your I'm going to message you to talk there
IAM-Brooklyn
OMG I Love scandal too girl and your book is AMAZING !!!
jazzyg99
I need help. Comment what you want to happen next and I'll put in!!
Gladiator_101
@jazzyg99 I really dont know what to aay cause in your book its 8 years later and I dont have any idea of what should be happening
Gladiator_101
you should start by figuring out if you're going to write in third person point of view or in each character's point of view because its confusing when its 3rd person point of view and then out of no where it changes to a characters point of view then you also need to edit like grammar and punctuation and spelling and stuff like that just double check your work and your book would get somewhere just be a little more in me you got me like don't have your book a mess and know where you're going with this story
Gladiator_101
@jazzyg99 and by the way I wasn't being rude by saying this I was just trying to help you as a fellow reader and scandal fan
Gladiator_101
@jazzyg99 I could proff read them and edit the chapters but im not really a writer so ... but I could always give ideas
Gladiator_101
I am a huge fan of SCANDAL as well but your scandal book needs major editing it's a mess I understand you're not done with it but before you think of moving on you should really clean everything up maybe even start over because I'm not trying to seem harsh or anything but that is a scandal fan to me was a huge disappointment writing books isn't for everyone just being honest