Jared Dimock

@hoverdahl It only took me until now to realize that your Gameshowkidd. I think they look fine. Oh, and I read Chapter 2 and it looks good. The only thing I would ask you to edit is the pre-fight stuff regarding the character names and have them be in italics, and the same goes for the ‘Information’ bit as well.

@JTom09 I’m aware, the problem is that I’m on vacation and I currently have an internship. So it will be a while. I will try my best to at least read it over the trip.

Have fun!

@JTom09 Thanks, although it might take me a while since I’m in the middle of doing edits for a chapter of a different story. In fact it could be weeks before I could make leeway because a cruise that I will be doing starting the next weekend.

@JTom09 Hey, it's me. So I sent you a couple of edits for you to do with your updated chapter. However, I'm not done with editing since there is a matter that needs to be addressed that I want you to fix (as it pertains to the new combos in the opening battle).
            
            Also, I did check at the end of the Mutant King fight to see if the limit with Sora, Kion, and Kiara was changed to Sora with ALL THE LIONS and so far, nothing has changed (unless I'm missing something here since I noticed that you did mention the matter of naming Sora, Kiara and Kion's limit during the next chapter which could explain the very last thing where both Scar and Young Xehanort's hands/paws twitch)?

1. Yes
            2. I'll put that in next chapter
            3. I was tired after working on this for OVER A MONTH. But Super Sayian's gonna help me.

@JTom09 Ok, so I just finished the Mutant King fight (need I point out that there were instances where you called it Mutant Lion) and I happened to take note of the attack that Sora, Kion, and Kiara used to finish the battle and I have three questions. 
            
            1. Is that attack that Sora, Kion, and Kiara used a Limit Attack?
            
            2. If that was a Limit Attack, does it have a name (since you didn't have the three mentioned name)?
            
            3. How come you decided to just have Sora, Kion, and Kiara do a limit instead of Sora with ALL THE LIONS (since you normally do a limit attacks that feature ALL THE NEW KEYBLADE WEILDERS)?