ajoy9235
Why are you still someone else stories? That's not right!
jean687
Christine882116
Your stories absolutely suck. Your math is wrong, no feelings, dialogues need to be clarified. The chapters need to be clarified for pov, and don’t even finish the stories.
CherylDunn3
The moongoddess revenge - started off ok but not much details n feelings n stuff when writing about whats gappened.
It all seems very fast paced like this happens then this then this all the time. Need to slow it slightly and put more context in to what is happening.
It also seems to be in third person writing i.e. alpha gene lay thinking, alpha gene did this(while on his pov) not as i lay thinking or i went and did this.
Marianne9891
@CherylDunn3 a pay app called Libya’s your story don’t get close to me. https://h5.libynovel.com/#/bookShare?bookId=161209&xAppInfo=2.6.2/liby/ios
toryalpha23
Are you going to be finishing or updating any of the stories
JordyTipa
These are Whisper5531 stories
damcoco9
hello, why did you write several books at the same time without finishing them???? there are plenty of books in progress, it's strange and unfortunate
ShannonNations
About “Don’t Get Close To Me”. The twins’s birthday should have been in the late 90’, because no one had cell phones in the late 70’a early 80’s. You might want to correct that.
Carlac716
Why did you end the moon goddess revenge like that?
FrancesSauceda
I just read your story alone always alone. I would love to know what happens, do thwy get married, have children, etc...
Elliemaeshopping
In what order should your books be read?
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