fantasy-mangalover12

Hi friend , if you don't mind ,I would like you to check my BTS fanfic ,I am a new writer and it would be great if get some suggestions and views on my work which can help me improve, sorry to annoy you
          Thanks!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/251758948?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=fantasy-mangalover12&wp_originator=4Twes64%2B9gAEI0GVffbo92bOpqNOrnLz0JIQIxB6bxMnQcqI0qlYYr0cmI%2FUtsYcl8TEhf0sLU5O9xcTdLgt5it8JMl9r95kZcWxJpTe5EUX3KZZYXfeTtb1foFpuTXs