jellperson

yo i'm writing something if anybody wants to read it currently only a bio for the MC is up but it's something oh and I am still homophobic

roprothepro

Thank you for all the feedback honestly fist of konshu is a absolute mess and I'll likely return to do some corrections at some point once I finish with the other like 6 project I'm working on

jellperson

@roprothepro 
            and here's a playlist of writing tips that help me from time to time
            
            https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLzF4jLlxM0lBjj7EGdxCLi2B9EVOqUZ3a&si=99i1Tq3k4ZdGRt_4
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jellperson

@roprothepro 
            
            yeah it's fine just a lot of confusion happening when reading because of missing context and forgotten plot i'm not blaming you or trying to be rude just having a hard time reading the story but i'll look forward to reading your other stories when their done and if you need inspiration for any new stories may i suggest looking into kamen rider it's been an inspiration for many of the fanfics i also want to write
            
            anyway pleas remember the 2 most important rule of writing enjoy what your writing and always take a break to re-read your work because then you burnout way less often
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