jelsa_foreves

Hi guys,
          	So one of my friends is writing a short story for a school project and would really appreciate a few reads with some feedback (grammar mistakes/ plot holes) its called Grey Lines and you can find it here: https://www.wattpad.com/495747249-grey-lines-welcome-reader-s
          	So go give it a read shes writing it up at the moment but it should be completed by thursday this week. X

jelsa_foreves

Hi guys,
          So one of my friends is writing a short story for a school project and would really appreciate a few reads with some feedback (grammar mistakes/ plot holes) its called Grey Lines and you can find it here: https://www.wattpad.com/495747249-grey-lines-welcome-reader-s
          So go give it a read shes writing it up at the moment but it should be completed by thursday this week. X

Anikasmiles

I finished one of your books where jack dies and I'm crying so hard right now I'm not even joking

HazelSkywalker1

@thelightningthief2 and u call your self a Christian ha 
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maiantheia

YOUR BOOKS ARE SO AWESOME! I LOVE THE PIRATE COVE!!! *squeals*
          HAHAHA! 
          ~AWESOME BOOKS ARE THE ONES MADE BY AWESOME AUTHORS~

maiantheia

@jelsa_foreves THANKS FOR THE FOLLOW! ;-D 
            YOU ARE AWESOME. THANKS!
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jelsa_foreves

@Russophile thankyou i'm glad you like it
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