jelsa_foreves
Hi guys, So one of my friends is writing a short story for a school project and would really appreciate a few reads with some feedback (grammar mistakes/ plot holes) its called Grey Lines and you can find it here: https://www.wattpad.com/495747249-grey-lines-welcome-reader-s So go give it a read shes writing it up at the moment but it should be completed by thursday this week. X