jerzzzone

I'm in that point in life where I'm waiting for things to unravel... to get what I want out of life. I'm just positive about it. If that happens, I'll have more time here for my stories. Bcoz I really want to finish my stories... #hopeful

Mystique44

Hi I have some poetry maybe you can tell me what you think thx have a good one

jerzzzone

already did. your poems speak about life and freedom and dreams.. i like them overall.. 
            i would just suggest you to be careful with few spellings and correct words to use as they would confuse the poems' meanings. 
            -common misuse of words are: there/their
            throw/through
            your/you're.. study about the words and try to use them properly. :)
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ImEyaaa

Hello po kuya :) Pa- post lang sa wall mo. May irerecommend lang sana akong stories sayo sana mabasa mo. It's my work actually. "If You Love Me Back" and "Lucky Eight"  thanks. ^^

jerzzzone

just did. :) naenjoy q yung "Lucky Eight" heheh. And i think i like it already.
            Thanks sa pag add ng Hunter sa RL mo. :)
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