jesse-has-clock

i ended up posting the first chapters of the two rewrites lol
          	meant to do it yesterday but my wifi was out

wolfy-kun12365

@ jesse-has-clock  I love both chapters already they're really good! Keep up the good work and don't rush yourself:)
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phetiamwantip

Hey, Jesse! I sent the Google docs of your Ninjago Act 3; now I'm ready for Act 4.

jesse-has-clock

@phetiamwantip oh cool! i didn't realise you were still editing those. thank you so much!
            i'm going to be a bit busy this weekend, but i do have some days off next week. i'll spend some time moving things around then.
            also i hope you had a good christmas if you celebrate! if not, i hope the past month has been great! and happy early new year!
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phetiamwantip

Hey, @jesse-has-clock, my brain just gave me an idea!
          
          How about (Y/n) create a lion? A male lion, Leo, a lioness, Leona, and a little male cub named Lionel.

phetiamwantip

@jesse-has-clock, I think... it's the most greatest idea I've ever heard. I can't wait to see it!
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jesse-has-clock

@phetiamwantip i have been thinking about this and am still planning on these three appearing soon!
            a little spoiler, but i was thinking of leo and leona being guards of another village, inspired by the chinese statues of lions in front of shrines
            and lionel could be in training for that or maybe just a patrol for the village, making sure people are doing ok
            thanks for checking up! hope the holidays are good!
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phetiamwantip

@jesse-has-clock Lions are brave and strong. They are always looking for any signs of danger to keep their cubs safe. Their roar can be heard all over Africa and in a jungle. Perhaps the ninjas and Y/n will see them in your future chapter; I'll be willing to see them.
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LisaHatchett

Hey Jesse! 
          I love the first story you wrote(the one with kunai), I'm currently reading it, but I got confused when you mention that you'll rewrite it. 
          Or edit it???? 
          What do you mean by this? 
          Are you going to write a whole other story? 
          Or should I start reading from the beginning again? 
          And is it a problem if I just continue reading? 
          Maybe you recommend me to read another of your stories, such as the Ring of the Artisis...??? (Forgot the name sorry) 
          I really need answers, thank you

LisaHatchett

@jesse-has-clock ok thank you! 
            Good luck continuing the story! 
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jesse-has-clock

@NinjagoLisa oh uh hello!
            yeah there's currently a rewrite up now! i talked about it a bit in the most recent chapter of the kunai one lol
            i'm rewriting both the kunai and the ring books, and they're up on my profile now
            there's only one chapter of both right now, but hopefully i'll update them a bit more consistently!
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wolfy-kun12365

Hello I really love your story the one from elsewhere! And I wanted to ask if you going ot continue the story and if you already know when you Posted the new chapter! But please don't feel like you need for rush or do something that you didn't wna to continue I only asked<3 
          (Sorry if my English isn't good it isn't my first language)

wolfy-kun12365

@ jesse-has-clock  alright take your time and remember don't rush yourself and I'm already excited for the new chapter! And thanks:)
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jesse-has-clock

@wolfy-kun12365 aw man thanks for the comment
            i've actually been working on a rewrite of the one from elsewhere and haven't really been working on the original a whole lot. i'll make an announcement when the first chapter is up?
            also your english is pretty good!
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jesse-has-clock

this message may be offensive
not to be like,,, an asshole, i guess, but i'm rewriting my two (three ig) books?
          
          i know i already rewrote ring of the artisan twice technically, but i've been experimenting in my writing and have started writing original fiction and i'm finding it *really* difficult to write in second person point of view now
          
          not to mention that i'm not fully happy with my works? i've grown a lot and feel like i can write the stories so much better and do them justice, both plot-wise and style-wise. a lot of things don't feel right and i know it's only fanfiction but i really want to do my best!
          
          i'll definitely leave 'ring of the artisan' up for anyone to read anytime, and i'll continue editing it when i can, but 'heart of the artisan' and 'the one from elsewhere' most likely will be unpublished eventually since they aren't completed in favour of the rewrites
          
          sorry for that long post lol (and the double-spacing it makes it easier for me to read my ramblings) but i basically disappeared for like two months and wanted to share what i've been thinking about and why i haven't done anything recently

CallieFan

@jesse-has-clock Do what makes you feel comfortable.
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jesse-has-clock

@jesse-has-clock it's very slow since inspiration is at its lowest right now (and things have been busy recently) but i'm trying what i can!
            i don't want to take it too fast and burnout
            thanks for checking up on me!
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jesse-has-clock

might be spending some time either on a break or editing / rewriting my two stories rn
          just a little warning

jesse-has-clock

@jesse-has-clock thank you so much
            i'll send a virtual hug!
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phetiamwantip

That's okay. I'm glad that you're feeling better. I'm giving you a hug to make you happy. (Hug @jesse-has-clock)
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jesse-has-clock

@jesse-has-clock ah sorry for the long wait there
            i'm doing a little better. got some editing in here and there
            i'm getting 'back into the swing of things,' as another friend told me, so hopefully things should go back to normal!
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jesse-has-clock

i don't know how many readers read these lol, but a warning that both my stories most likely won't be updated on time
          i've been having a rough week lol i'm doing a fair bit better but i haven't been getting things done recently
          thanks :)

phetiamwantip

It's okay, @jesse-has-clock have a break there's no need to rush.
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Axel_Drawz

Hey it’s alright take all the time you need, no rush on the next chapters of any of your stories :)
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