caliburrrito

Hey! I really hate to bother you or interrupt your day,  but I’ve been writing a story recently, and I would love any feedback you’d have or any way I could improve! I appreciate it:) Here it is:
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/279356664?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_story_details&wp_uname=caliburrrito&wp_originator=PtEAQ%2FZXQcLxvRfUxwe6EZOwdzs2LBLQtglJ9rNPizLyh7nvnKwjTaZOV06qPstWFMCVyI3LyNw4N1sbueLcQaX%2FxxhJhIrY5Kz%2BdzyGdcqkTZntXl%2FfAxrJJP%2Bna7w1
          
          The story is “Mudshuvel”, and the basic premise is of a 17-year-old girl named Nami Mei, living in northern Alaska, who has recurring lucid dreams for as long as she remembers. She ends up joining a rock band and becomes a singer, but it turns out singing about your nightmares isn’t great for your health. That’s all I can say.
          
          Thank you!!