DejaGiggles

Hi....I have a book called highschool would u mind checking it out and tell me what you think

DejaGiggles

@dejanyah ok thanks for the advice! If u decide to continue don't for get to vote and I will be looking forward to your comments.......thanks love
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jesssyy16

@dejanyah hey girl I think your story is really cute, i only read the first chapter and I think it would make a good short story, if you wanted to make it more than that, I would suggest more detail, go a lil slow and add more writing, but I think it’s good and cute from what you have
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