luvshb
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Hi. Can you read and review my Yushi's fanfiction? Holding on to Yushi https://www.wattpad.com/story/381655400?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=luvshb Thank you so much.
jheeyaki
@luvshb hi! i'm so sorry for replying late cuz my school has been so busy lately. well, after all this book was such a rollercoaster of emotions! i could literally feel yoora’s pain, and the way you wrote her grief was so raw and real. her love for yushi was super touching, and i loved how you showed their memories together and it made me understand why losing him hurt so much. i love on how she starts to figure herself out after losing him. also, the flashbacks were beautiful but felt a tiny bit long in some places. maybe shortening them a little would keep the story moving and make the present-day moments hit harder. overall, I really loved this story. it’s deep and emotional, and I legit couldn’t stop reading. Keep it up! ❤️
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