jhopessugakookie56

this is my first story so dont hate on me guys https://www.wattpad.com/story/164878827

thotticusjimin

Hiya ^_^ sorry if I’m being really annoying but I was wondering if you could check out my Taehyung ff? I could really use some opinions on it so far but I get it if you don’t want to though ❤️

jhopessugakookie56

so I really liked the story so far. I think you should include cora meeting another boy group. maybe make the boy group tae's brothers/best friends and they open up to cora on what happened to tae...maybe they can blame jimin for what happened to tae which jimin is already guilty for. but cora brings all of them together and tells them she can see taehyung and that she needs their help for him to pass on
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thotticusjimin

@jhopessugakookie56 thank you! ❤️
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jhopessugakookie56

oh sure, my pleasure
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