Your book is really good so far! if I'm being honest the whole love thing went a bit fast maybe start with 'like' or something similar. I recommend not using the words I love you until maybe after a few more chapters. But overall I think its a really good book! Keep writing I love it!~❤❤❤❤❤
@JikookProductions you never know what fate brings my dear... It truly is a mystery but high hopes or no high hopes~ you will find someone who truly makes you happy