jiminsraspberry

Guess who's back

your_sweettoe

thanks for your follow, i don‘t know what for but thanks >~<
          btw, i can‘t see your book anymore :(

your_sweettoe

@jiminsraspberry ahh ok, i‘ll be waiting then!
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jiminsraspberry

Yeah I actually unposted the story and will be editing it to make it more, “realistic” since I have been getting pointers that I should change them 
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KFshadowGirl13

For your story The Bermuda I would like to give you some suggestions if you don't mind all you have to do is contact me.

KFshadowGirl13

@KFshadowGirl13 will do I enjoy reading people storys and thier takes on how they tell them and I love to help whenever I can so I can't wait 
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jiminsraspberry

@KFshadowGirl13  thanks ! hit me hardcore with corrections,  lol
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jiminsraspberry

what if I re-write, "The Bermuda" in third person point of view?

Anxiety1005

@augustd_tonguenology okay! Thankyou for replying ♡ good luck!
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Anxiety1005

@augustd_tonguenology oh are you rewriting it rn?
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