
jiminsraspberry
Guess who's back

your_sweettoe
thanks for your follow, i don‘t know what for but thanks >~< btw, i can‘t see your book anymore :(

jiminsraspberry
Yeah I actually unposted the story and will be editing it to make it more, “realistic” since I have been getting pointers that I should change them
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KFshadowGirl13
For your story The Bermuda I would like to give you some suggestions if you don't mind all you have to do is contact me.

KFshadowGirl13
@KFshadowGirl13 will do I enjoy reading people storys and thier takes on how they tell them and I love to help whenever I can so I can't wait
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jiminsraspberry
what if I re-write, "The Bermuda" in third person point of view?

LTheBattyInsomniac
Will you please update the Bermuda?