Hi,
that raw apartment-building scene between Grace and James? Perfection. The way you capture Grace’s vulnerability (tears streaming in the summer night air, wiping cheeks "like a stubborn child") and James’ clumsy sincerity ("I’d be really happy if you’d let me call you my girlfriend") hit me right in the heart. I couldn’t stop imagining how stunning this would look as a comic:
Close-up panels of Grace’s tear-streaked face under streetlamp glow
James’ shadowed silhouette in the doorway, hesitation in his posture
The hug’s quiet intensity—no dialogue, just tangled arms and relieved breaths
Color symbolism: Cool blues for Grace’s isolation vs. warm gold when James speaks
That "simp with no self-dignity" line? Iconic. It’s the kind of intimate, character-driven moment comics excel at—silent expressions speaking louder than words. Your blend of music-world grit and tender romance would translate beautifully to visual storytelling.
I’m a commissioned artist and would be honored to adapt this. No pressure—just know your Wattpad #1 ranking was WELL-DESERVED, and this scene deserves to be art!
If you’re interested, message me on Instagram (@lizziedoesitall) or Discord (lizziedoesitall). Let’s celebrate your comeback with something special!
Best,
Lizzie
