SoulfullySufficed

Hey!
          I'd love it if you could give  my collection of poems called "Wanderlust" a try. It would be awesome to hear your opinion on it; constructive criticism is appreciated with open arms :) 
          
          If you don't like this book posted on your walls, by all means delete this post.  Happy reading!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/116613631-wanderlust

qdauthor

HI Jina thanks for reading King and commenting. Just wondering, are you a beta reader? 
          Qiana

jinagarden

@qdauthor 
            Just read up to the end of what you've posted for King. Sorry to hear of your loss. Hope you feel up to writing again soon!
            If I can make a suggestion to please proof read before updating. It is quite frustrating when sentences don't make sense and things aren't clear. Many times I was going to stop reading but I'm a sucker for finding out what happened. Perhaps that is why your number of reads is lower than expected.
            Also, I understand there needs to be a certain amount of mystery but when things are revealed please be clearer about what is happening.  You won't have the luxury of authors notes in your final book. 
            I usually wait until a book is completed before I read it...thought King was completed with over 100 chapters lol
            I will look forward to your updates though.
            Take care.
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qdauthor

I'm always in the market for beta readers lol that's why I post my work to WP first to get feedback. 
            And I enjoy your comments. They're insightful and helpful. I only thought you were a beta reader bc your comments are more than just "he's hot. She's dumb. That's hot. " lol you know what I mean? 
            Chat soon 
            Qiana
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jinagarden

@qdauthor 
            Hi again, Qiana, 
            I looked up beta readers... sounds interesting. 
            Are you in the market for one?
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