@qdauthor
Just read up to the end of what you've posted for King. Sorry to hear of your loss. Hope you feel up to writing again soon!
If I can make a suggestion to please proof read before updating. It is quite frustrating when sentences don't make sense and things aren't clear. Many times I was going to stop reading but I'm a sucker for finding out what happened. Perhaps that is why your number of reads is lower than expected.
Also, I understand there needs to be a certain amount of mystery but when things are revealed please be clearer about what is happening. You won't have the luxury of authors notes in your final book.
I usually wait until a book is completed before I read it...thought King was completed with over 100 chapters lol
I will look forward to your updates though.
Take care.