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Hi guys,
          
          this is my first book/story ever. I've never even just tried writing anything so this is my first-hand experience, and *you're living in it.* - Sorry
          
          Ehm, I'd love for you guys to read it and tell me what you guys like about it, what you dislike about it, and what you'd change - any criticism that'll let me know what's up is very welcomed!
          
          Also, if you think it's a good idea for a story or not (read the description of the book, too) please let me know! 
          
          The first two parts are more like "Get To Know ~ the main character of the story", so reading the description might help as the story doesn't really say much at the moment... 
          
          Any share, like or comment will be MUCH APPRECIATED.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/366905496?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=jjeoleojeonjk

Hi guys 
          
          So, last night, I decided to write my own made-up story / more like "fucked-up" story. It's definitely not the greatest - I know, I've got a long way to go to get at least somewhat good at writing - this is my very first time trying something like this.
          
           I wanted to ask for your feedback on it; what you like about it, what you dislike about it, what you'd change, etc.
          
          It's currently got two parts. They're more like "get to know yourself" - aka get to know the character that you'll be experiencing the life of; a little "life-check" to know what the character has been through, etc.
          And don't worry! she won't be so bad and depressed the whole time. After an  encounter with a specific someone  she'll thrive and prosper! 
          
          Anyway, ehm. Any feedback is welcomed but pls be gentle Remember that this is my first time writing a story like that ; a story in general, doesn't matter what kind.
          
          And if you'll find it in you to share the story with your friends or even to a wider audience, it'll be very very very appreciated!!!
          
          Thank you!!!!

Hey sugar plum!!! Thanks so much for reading and voting for my fic No Harm List! Your support means the world to me!!! I hope you’ve enjoyed the story so far! Xoxoxo 
          

Love the username lolol

Děkuju za votes 

hello my friends 

Začala jsem psát novou story, ráda bych kdyby sis jí přečetla! :))