jkuromi874

Book Shout-Out!
          	
          	Title: "To Be, Rather Than To Seem" by @CrownedMadness 
          	
          	How many friends do you have?
          	
          	His stray thought leads him to reflect on his friendships and questions: what is a friend? With an unconventional upbringing affecting his adult life, he watches others age normally and struggles to be genuine. 
          	
          	Join him on a journey of self-discovery and human connections in this thought-provoking read.
          	
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/363749539?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=jkuromi874

d0miniqueWrites

Hi there, can you review my book p[ease
          Username: d0miniqueWrites
          Story Title: His Alone
          Genre: Dark Romance / New Adult
          Status: Ongoing
          Number of Chapters: prologue +6
          Mature/LGBTQ+: Mature (Violence/Dark Themes)
          Blurb/Summary: Tulia thought she could live a quiet life, but she didn’t account for Lucius—a man who's decided she is his fixation. Once he sets his mind on something, its a sure thing.
           
          What I want you to focus on: I am looking for a deep dive into character consistency and pacing. Specifically, does Lucius come across as genuinely intimidating/possessive without being a caricature? I also want to know if the tension between him and Tulia feels earned or if the "darker" elements (like the psychological toll) need more development.
          Specific Questions:
          Does the prose feel too wordy, not word enough? or does the imagery work for the tone?
          Is my linguistic writing style and grammar good or does my book feel like another bored teen writing whatever.
          
          Link to book:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/408631215-his-alone-18%2B?utm_source=web&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share_myworks

bangtanrewinds

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          Still wondering? Pondering will yield nothing but missed opportunities. Off you go now ¡
          
          ⧉  https://www.wattpad.com/story/351450075?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=buzzbangtan&wp_originator=Kw6GXTTWunwN8d6cSV0r0Zb33h4pxqsGDBw9xuFmyf6wwLBUBpVPJfE%2BpIjzUg5XCKJOV3d6wdZiVbh1%2BJePTGrkNB5Ov4h1bNheO0UThlRqoo6f1Vb7ZYJ2Q4bJyi1g

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jkuromi874

Book Shout-Out!
          
          Title: "To Be, Rather Than To Seem" by @CrownedMadness 
          
          How many friends do you have?
          
          His stray thought leads him to reflect on his friendships and questions: what is a friend? With an unconventional upbringing affecting his adult life, he watches others age normally and struggles to be genuine. 
          
          Join him on a journey of self-discovery and human connections in this thought-provoking read.
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/363749539?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=jkuromi874

jkuromi874

Discover "Rising Moon" by @Nikachu22 !
          
          Step inside Nirvana Academy, where success masks a dark reality. Gangs rule, violence looms, and rumors of a nocturnal predator abound. Follow Crescent as he navigates this treacherous world, protecting his brother and uncovering chilling secrets. 
          
          Get ready for a pulse-pounding read that will keep you hooked until the very end!
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/246918805?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=jkuromi874