Jared

Your book 'He says we are just friend'  Started well and took a different turn.
          
          Your work is detailed with many enjoyable details! Your a good writer though the chapters are too short. 
          
          I will talk of your two main characters, Emmett and Clay
              
                    My thoughts  are 
          
          Emment didn't deserve Clay.
          
           It  was a Novel that started well, then all of a sudden you had to make Clay beg for Emmett attention or ad you out it say his feelings first that is cliche,  as if  coming out and coming in terms of this new side of him was not enough for him, he had to watch the person he love .(Emmett) stab him again and again  with his ex, granted he didn't say anything. 
          It's just so wrong in my end, and I really hated how you made Clay open up about his felling first, make the contact first. 
          
          Nothing from Emment end just calm with stiff exterior and unresolved past as an excuse.
          
          Not impressed 
          
          Still a good piece would have been more.
          
          Love needs sacrifices from the two end not a one sided effort  with mere illusions of mind thoughts 
          
          
          
          Expected a better twist of Emmett doing more And 
          Putting at least a bare minimum effort!

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I'm really enjoying reading summer of firsts

Hello! I was wondering who did the profile for your story Milo and Juda?

If you want to read short "Boy's love" novel, then please check out my new novel. 
          
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          I’m Victor, a new writer on Wattpad. Could you please check out my book and give me your honest feedback?
          
          Please and thank you

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He Says He’s Just a Friend passed 200k reads!!!
          
          Thanks so much to everyone who’s read and commented and liked it! Your support makes me feel like continuing to write and post, especially in those times when I feel like I’m not very good and should just give it up.
          
          And if anyone is wondering, I am currently working on something new but it’s going kind of slow. Last year I started like five different stories but I didn’t really connect with any of them and I got stuck on most of them so I kept dropping them. Then I had massive writer’s block for months and didn’t write a single word. I’m trying to let this new one just flow and let it be whatever it is, and try not force it so I don’t end up hating it. So I can’t promise how long it will take, but I am working on it at least a little bit every day.