jndasn

So I just completely revised A Hero’s Secret! Originally I posted the very first draft of the story, so I’m ecstatic to see what everyone thinks now. 
          	
          	If you are interested, go check it out and let me know what you think!
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/115263512?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=jenandy_&wp_originator=JVG7uNfB4TGBvxMvEHeefpfKVhwaq93WnhNBNZN2wiVv8HZhtHy0Mo2%2Bkl8NR%2F9%2FAoJynt1h2YmDLWkEmUdCSaDjeMiiWkA1REsmM8vFawtcuHCR6Q5qjuOIeFvcXPez
          	

jndasn

So I just completely revised A Hero’s Secret! Originally I posted the very first draft of the story, so I’m ecstatic to see what everyone thinks now. 
          
          If you are interested, go check it out and let me know what you think!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/115263512?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=jenandy_&wp_originator=JVG7uNfB4TGBvxMvEHeefpfKVhwaq93WnhNBNZN2wiVv8HZhtHy0Mo2%2Bkl8NR%2F9%2FAoJynt1h2YmDLWkEmUdCSaDjeMiiWkA1REsmM8vFawtcuHCR6Q5qjuOIeFvcXPez
          

jndasn

I’ve really fallen off being active on here. I do hope to one day post more stories, but right now is not the right time for that. 
          
          However, in the off chance A Hero’s Secret readers browse this page, I want to thank you so much for the views, the votes, and the comments. I never thought this story would get as much recognition as it has (definitely not in its unedited state). 
          
          I also don’t get on here to answer all the comments, so I wanted to post an overall thank you to those taking the time to leave tips, reactions, and compliments. 
          
          From silent readers to active readers, it means the world to me that you’ve enjoyed A Hero’s Secret. Hopefully someday, you’ll get to enjoy it again—a new and improved version that you can hold in your hands. :) 
          
          Thank you again,
          Jenna

_strawberry_skies_

Hi! I just wanted to stop by and say that I absolutely ADORED your book A Hero's Secret. It was so unique to the usual stuff I'm reccomended, it wad well written, and very captivating. I found myself reading so many chapters every chance I got, and it was difficult to stop.
          
          I also really loved Dray and Wells (and loved their progressing relationship) and their personalities, they were just loveable characters in general. I hope that all goes well with editing the book, and I hope that you can get it published too! I would definitely want to buy it.
          I hope you have a great day/night! ♡

_strawberry_skies_

@jennadiane thank you! I appreciate it so so much. I'll private message you part of the first chapter :)
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jndasn

I try to do that as well, at least like 80% of it, haha. Sure! Do you want to just paste it into a private message? Otherwise, I can message you my email. :) 
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_strawberry_skies_

@jennadiane actually, if you don't mind, do you think that you could possibly read some of the first chapter and let me know what you think? I would appreciate the constructive criticism.
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jndasn

Is it bad that I make all my main character short and with long hair (like me)? I mean, at least the mannerisms come through realistically, haha. 
          
          On another note, A Hero's Secret hit 26k, so thank you! I've come out of another bout of depression, so I'm excited to start writing (and editing, still editing) again. This site will always be something that helps!

jndasn

Chapter 9 went up on Wrong! It's finally getting to "normal" length chapters, so that's exciting!
          
          Hopefully it'll tide readers over until Mon/Tues because my weekend is about to get crazy! After that though, life slows down, so updates speed up! I'm having fun with this one, guys!
          
          [Also, editing on A Hero's Secret is underway again. I took an unwanted, but probably mentally needed few month break.]

jndasn

Welp, I'm starting a new story! It's a little side project to get me through the monotonous task of editing A Hero's Secret. Plus, I want to be more active on here and it's much easy when I'm posting something new!
          
          It's called Wrong— take a look see and let me know what you think! It'll be a little different than my normal way of writing. ;)