joeymwagner

Is anyone interested in editing my book? I am looking for someone who can make the story more like a book, with descriptions and all. So you can make changes in the story and I can share the title, I don't mind. 

joeymwagner

@ joeymwagner  sure no problem 
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Jim_Bepp

So long as you can wait till 3rd November because that’s my last exam
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joeymwagner

Is anyone interested in editing my book? I am looking for someone who can make the story more like a book, with descriptions and all. So you can make changes in the story and I can share the title, I don't mind. 

joeymwagner

@ joeymwagner  sure no problem 
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Jim_Bepp

So long as you can wait till 3rd November because that’s my last exam
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GlenMaddock

Hi you wanted me to have a read . I did though it’s not like stories I’ve read it kind of is like factsion where fact and fiction are combined . Some of the ideas and presentation are really interesting and I read up to the chapter after the kidnapping etc . Though I didn’t find it to my taste doesn’t mean it isn’t good . I love some of the ideas, though there are inherent issues with solar and environmental energy such as reliable base loads as well as improved peak performance etc there’s a lot of scope for some great ideas . That quite feasibly have been discovered previously . We have lost a lot from the ancient times . So in that tegard I loved the conceptual leaps to wheelbarrow etc . But i just couldn’t keep going as I wasn’t grabbed by it. It’s great just not my book. Ty for the invite to read and comment . 

joeymwagner

@ GlenMaddock  thanks a lot for your honest opinion, I really appreciate it 
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joeymwagner

Hello everyone. I don't know I like this new update or not right now but I can't deny it is a great opportunity.
          
          I just want to say if you are interested in sci-fi stories based on real scientific stuff, and dystopia, you should check out my book.
          I don't care for the votes, I am looking for real readers so if you don't like it, that's fine.  Just read the first chapter and see what's it about.
          And also I really like negative feedback so feel free to say anything. That's how you grow! 
          
          Thanks a lot for reading. I hope you get a chance to check it out. Bye! 

joeymwagner

@ Number_The_Books it's OK. We are friends 
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DREAMNORTH

@joeymwagner trust me. I'll be there with a lot of negative! 
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Jim_Bepp

How have you been going recently lol i have been off wattpad for legit so long is there new stuff yet? Also have u been reading Grave i dont even know xD

joeymwagner

@ Jim_Bepp  not really. i have been off for so long its hard to restart again. I know what's gonna happen I just don't have the motivation to write it. Hopefully I'll start soon 
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