to all who are reading my book "Reincarnated as a doomed villainess," I am no longer releasing chapters for it.
Why? Because the original problems I noticed with it have only gotten worse. So that you know I'm not just randomly saying that I'll list a few.
1. The religion in the story not established well enough and has become a scapegoat for explanations when I had none.
2. The leveling system is horrible. I mean one system for one person. How is anyone going to keep up?
3. Otome-was planning on having this play a more significant role, but I've ignored it so long that if I brought it back now, it wouldn't make sense.
4. My character doesn't even seem human in any sense. Nothing seems to phase her, and when I try to do this, it seems incredibly awkward.
5. Strength shouldn't be something so quickly gained. My character barely works for it and seems to fall in her lap.
6. Scarcely any time in between events. The book feels like it's at the rabbit setting jumping from one event to the next without any time for character or world building.
Now, this doesn't mean I've decided to drop it. I'm going to be going through a massive overhaul to get this where I want it. In the meantime, I'll leave the original posted for those of you that would still like to read it. Thanks for the support and comments, both positive and negative. They have allowed me to analyze my book far more than what I was capable of by myself.
So until next time have continued great days! :D
