johntaylorshairdye

Hello when you write can you add paragraphs, punctuation in the right places, etc?  Speech marks are not in the correct position .. where they are supposed to indicate speech they are including people’s thoughts .. 
          
          Observing writer’s standards would help to provide context instead of a messy, long unspecified set of thoughts or statements? where the reader has to imagine what is meant... 
          
          This is hard work to read when it should be a pleasure.
          Constructive criticism.