johnteller1992

Sorry if the chapters have been feeling a little short as of late. I’ve been trying to provide accuracy to the story of the game while also retaining some agency of my own. This next one will be another short one as well, but longer ones, especially towards the end of the story will indeed come out.
          	
          	As always, you can vote and comment if you vibe with where The Decepticon Rookie is heading.

johnteller1992

Sorry if the chapters have been feeling a little short as of late. I’ve been trying to provide accuracy to the story of the game while also retaining some agency of my own. This next one will be another short one as well, but longer ones, especially towards the end of the story will indeed come out.
          
          As always, you can vote and comment if you vibe with where The Decepticon Rookie is heading.

zhou_enlai

Will you make more su stuff? I really liked blue's Lanent

johnteller1992

@zhou_enlai But i'll certainly try to post some more chapters. Thank you.
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johnteller1992

@zhou_enlai Yeah. I've been in a creative drought since last year, and that's why I haven't really been posting a whole lot.
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johnteller1992

Thanks to everyone who supported my latest project, but I’m trashing half of it and going with something completely new.
          
          The way I was going felt too pretentious and preachy at the time, and that’s not the theme I’m trying to capture with my stories.
          
          So from here on out, I’m going to be refurbishing the first five chapters of Blue’s Lament and pumping out fresh ones with a more lighter tone, but still maybe keep the same feel of it. Have a good morning/night, God bless.

johnteller1992

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You know, it’s kinda weird. When I was posting nsfw content, I’d have people flocking towards my books. This world is fucked up.

johnteller1992

@FaizNabil thank you for the advice, I’ll be sure to use that advice to the best of my ability.
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FaizNabil

@johnteller1992 Hmm... I could see that the book is sometimes hard to follow for new readers considering that it is based on a continuity (based on season 3). Perhaps you could try to add some images at the beginning of the story so that some readers could have some form of visualization to ease them up on the characters aside from them having to search it up (mostly on the obscure characters).
            
            That's all I can give you for now.
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johnteller1992

@FaizNabil is there anything you can critique my book on? Like legitimately?
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