johnteller1992

Hey, everyone. I'm hitting a bit of a stump writing the sixth chapter for TDR. It'd be cool to hear y'alls ideas on the book. Feedback would be hella nice as well, some healthy criticisms would go a long way. Let me know!

johnteller1992

Thanks to everyone who supported my latest project, but I’m trashing half of it and going with something completely new.
          
          The way I was going felt too pretentious and preachy at the time, and that’s not the theme I’m trying to capture with my stories.
          
          So from here on out, I’m going to be refurbishing the first five chapters of Blue’s Lament and pumping out fresh ones with a more lighter tone, but still maybe keep the same feel of it. Have a good morning/night, God bless.

johnteller1992

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You know, it’s kinda weird. When I was posting nsfw content, I’d have people flocking towards my books. This world is fucked up.

johnteller1992

@FaizNabil thank you for the advice, I’ll be sure to use that advice to the best of my ability.
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FaizNabil

@johnteller1992 Hmm... I could see that the book is sometimes hard to follow for new readers considering that it is based on a continuity (based on season 3). Perhaps you could try to add some images at the beginning of the story so that some readers could have some form of visualization to ease them up on the characters aside from them having to search it up (mostly on the obscure characters).
            
            That's all I can give you for now.
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johnteller1992

@FaizNabil is there anything you can critique my book on? Like legitimately?
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johnteller1992

Since I got the first act in the series down, I wanna move from writing 5k words in the book to 10k-15k words from here on out. Seriously, if you all have ANY critique at all, please do comment. Thanks and have a good morning, you all. ~ JT