joibrazille

Who want's to help me with this book need help with the couple of chapters.

Who want to help me with my book?

Hey guys....sorry I haven't been posting. I was in a wreck that left me paralyzed and in the hospital. It was difficult to get through both mentally and physically due to the pain in my body and the trama from the wreck.... I'm out of the hospital now and doing better. Still some pain but I'm getting my legs back. Just when I thought things were getting better my grandmother got cancer... She died last month. So it's been a tough time with all this going on. I'll be posting again soon so be waiting for that. Bye!

When will you update ??? 

Hey Joibrazille,
          
          I have read your book but I can't help but get confused on where there is and isn't talking do to no quotation marks in the story, (""). It's not a huge problem and I think your story is amazing so far, but I just wanted to let you know as clarifying the speaking parts can bring in more readers! :) Anyways, keep writing and let me know if I can ever help at all. 
          
          Enjoy :) 

Ok fans I need y'all to tell me what you think about the book so far