Hi! So first order of business, I have finished revising chapter 1 of Shiftless(finally!), so please, go read and I hope I will get a better response this time! Second, you must go read this story written by a friend of mine. It is titled Colours Of Change, by pheonix-on-fire. It's a serious work, but the writing is amazing. If you enjoy that(I know you will), then you should also read A Christmas Wish, also by him. That one is a lot more playful than the other, and I love the main character Sarah, because she is easy to relate to, if your a girl lol. So go read! Trust me, you wont regret it! Here is a link to his page that contains the books: http://www.wattpad.com/user/pheonix-on-fire.