jonlon170

By no means do I have any malicious intent and this is direct to all of the authors.  Your many stories are wonderful to read.  The plots are captivating but with all sincerity please take time to proofread your story before presenting it.  They can loss so much of their promise when the reader has to struggle through bad grammar and careless mistakes.  You guys are better than that.  Be serious about your craft.  Don’t be in such a rush to put out a chapter that is riddled with not just using the wrong words but with mid-referencing your characters.  Again I mean no offense because your story lines and plots are absolutely great but weather this is a hobby for you or an actual career please show your commitment through careful examination of your presentation.  Great job one and all.  Please continue to put out great stories.  

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bubblegum_space

HEYA! I’m an English author who likes to write adventurous-twisted-erotic novels ;)
          My first publication, ‘My Trophy Boy’, is an unfinished story about a relationship between a black British nerd with a dirty little secret, and a low-key aristocrat named Quinton Michaels. 
          Disclaimer! READ THE TAGS to ensure you know what you’re getting yourself into :) ALSO DONT (!!) assume this is a cliché, because it’s not! 
          I would very much appreciate you sharing, commenting and voting on this novel for feedback purposes :)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/255891617?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=bubblegum_space&wp_originator=aupuPl96%2Biz3OblFML2XXRc4b6rVR%2B7M8tjhpVYEbpMNNVU8wQy0OXARSqhqcHuBeqYrBXzqK49HMrtgQnvbAZRDFLJYPaUU6oV42bUOwxm4i9ktRX4xhoy%2B9%2FXJ5nVs

jonlon170

By no means do I have any malicious intent and this is direct to all of the authors.  Your many stories are wonderful to read.  The plots are captivating but with all sincerity please take time to proofread your story before presenting it.  They can loss so much of their promise when the reader has to struggle through bad grammar and careless mistakes.  You guys are better than that.  Be serious about your craft.  Don’t be in such a rush to put out a chapter that is riddled with not just using the wrong words but with mid-referencing your characters.  Again I mean no offense because your story lines and plots are absolutely great but weather this is a hobby for you or an actual career please show your commitment through careful examination of your presentation.  Great job one and all.  Please continue to put out great stories.  

bubblegum_space

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