joraquinn

For those who have currently been reading The 1000 Year Demon, I have completely redone the introduction. Chapter 1 and 2 are completely new chapters and I plan on adding at least one more if not two more chapters in for part one before I dive into Jung-yi's story. I would appreciate it if you guys could read my two new chapters and give me some feed back. I feel like my writing is getting better and that I am making a lot of progress.  There are a few parts of the story that I am unsure about. It is difficult for me to write the memories / visions / flashback scenes, so I am hoping they are easy to follow and read. Make sure you guys let me know what you think! Thanks for reading :D

joraquinn

@corabellewrites thank you so much! My original chapter one is down there as bonus content.. it is good, but it didn't fit with the rest of the book so I had to axe it.
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corabellewrites

Hello!! I absolutely adore the new chapter 1. I didn’t get a chance to read the original but I’m diggin the changes your making. I think your writing has dramatically improved based on what I’ve read so far. I can’t wait to read what comes next! 
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xfamiliarfreedomx

Hello there!  Thank you so much for taking the time to follow my page and check out my first-ever attempt at a horror short story collection.  Granted - the collection is one story - but I do appreciate the support on that initiative.  If you ever want to trade reads and critiques, please feel free to reach out!

wolf3467

Hey just wanted to say thanks for the follow.

wolf3467

@joraquinn Thanks I hope you like my books the book I'm focusing on at this moment is Demon Hunters. 
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joraquinn

@wolf3467 no problem! I've been meaning to get around to reading today since I've gotten a good bit of writing done for my current WIP. Your stuff is next on my list since we write similar content. :)
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joraquinn

For those who have currently been reading The 1000 Year Demon, I have completely redone the introduction. Chapter 1 and 2 are completely new chapters and I plan on adding at least one more if not two more chapters in for part one before I dive into Jung-yi's story. I would appreciate it if you guys could read my two new chapters and give me some feed back. I feel like my writing is getting better and that I am making a lot of progress.  There are a few parts of the story that I am unsure about. It is difficult for me to write the memories / visions / flashback scenes, so I am hoping they are easy to follow and read. Make sure you guys let me know what you think! Thanks for reading :D

joraquinn

@corabellewrites thank you so much! My original chapter one is down there as bonus content.. it is good, but it didn't fit with the rest of the book so I had to axe it.
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corabellewrites

Hello!! I absolutely adore the new chapter 1. I didn’t get a chance to read the original but I’m diggin the changes your making. I think your writing has dramatically improved based on what I’ve read so far. I can’t wait to read what comes next! 
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joraquinn

Big changes coming to The 1000 Year Demon. I have moved the original first chapter to a bonus chapter and replaced it with a new first chapter. I would love to get your feedback as it was extremely difficult to figure out how I wanted the story to begin and what perspective I wanted to write in. I will be adding 2 or 3 more chapters before I begin Jung-Yi's part of the story. Thanks to everyone who has read, voted, and commented so far. I feel as if my writing is getting better and my goal is to have this book done by early fall. I will keep you guys updated on any changes I make. Again, thank you so much for reading! 

joraquinn

Thanks to everyone for the adds, follows, reads, comments, and votes! You guys have inspired me so much to keep writing. I have actually been completing and releasing more chapters faster than I originally planned. I am leaving tonight for vacation for the week. I won't have time to upload anything, but I will be writing more and taking the time to catch up on reading, so if you have anything you want me to read and comment on, reply and let me know!
          
          Again thank you all so much! Chapters 4 and 5 are both available to read! I may also be releasing some side stories on their own. Just a couple of chapters giving more background information on side characters like Nara and Sang-hoon. I am exciting to write more and it is all thanks to the encouragement from you guys <3

joraquinn

Chapter 3 for The 1000 Year Demon is now live! I also have new cover art thanks to @niXieDust_ !  I apologize for any errors. I may go back and re-edit it at a later day this week, but I at least wanted to get the chapter out there before I go on vacation for the week. 
          
          I think I will be making changes to the story as well. As much as I wanted this to be a story about Lenora, Jung-Yi just takes the stage over and over again. I may delete and archive the first chapter and make everything in third person. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
          
          And thanks so much to everyone for their follows, votes, and comments! I finally feel like I belong to a real community. You are all amazing, thank you so much!

ilgamusembi

@joraquinn 
            Yaaaas, now I'll read three whole chapters...sooo excited 
            Btw I've seen your comments and I'll do what you've said. I'll space out the paragraphs and dialogues..
            Thanks for reading love :)
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MistressOP

@joraquinn welcome!!! will get to reading soon :)
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niXieDust_

@joraquinn I'll look forward on those changes 
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anastarr1

Heloo
          Thank you very much for the follow. Do you mind checking out my book 'A quest to the Borat' which is fantasy or 'the actual beginning' which is romance on my page. I would very much appreciate votes and comments on my books.
          Ana