jordansmith14

@Kommando293 no prob I'll read a book soon 

thanks for the compliment but I have much to learn till I am really good at it

@Kommando293 no problem bro u seem to have a lot of books about war and battle and I may need to take notes from someone who seems to be experienced with battle imagery 

make sure u vote for that chapter and the whole story

its out. read and enjoy. I just published "Chapter 4: Z sword part2" of my story "Dragon Ball AF #1: Xicor Saga". http://w.tt/1PENSRj

@ZaeJohnson oh