jordyn-ackles

So I have taken this last year to develop my writing which was not very good before. Anyways, heres a sneak peek to the new book im writing. Putting my new and improved skills to the test, please comment any of your thoughts or impressions.
          	
          	The White Rose: description:
          	Aurora Arden's dreams are haunted by a man she's never met and he wants nothing more than to destroy her. Than to bestow upon her the emptiness he feels. She is fully capable of handling him in her mind when the lights are out and the world is quiet but when her dreams slowly begin to bring him to life, the world she had known begins to unravel. 
          	
          	Sneak peek:
          	  Aurora jumped back, tripping on her heels and falling to the ground. She winced at the cold, icy ache of the snow which numbed her hands as she dragged herself father away from the man. Nonetheless he pursued her, growing closer with each step he took. The man loomed over her, his smile intensified. The corners of his mouth had stretched up so far that Aurora thought his face might burst. She was still on the snowy pavement, her eyes wide and laced with alarm. She swallowed hard as she took in this mans demeanor. 
          	
          	He extended a hand towards Aurora, his fingertips ghosting over the side of her pale face. She quite visibly stiffened. His eyes were stern and lifeless as he stared at her.
          	
          	"You have no recollection of me do you?" He asked, his smile turning bitter.

jordyn-ackles

So I have taken this last year to develop my writing which was not very good before. Anyways, heres a sneak peek to the new book im writing. Putting my new and improved skills to the test, please comment any of your thoughts or impressions.
          
          The White Rose: description:
          Aurora Arden's dreams are haunted by a man she's never met and he wants nothing more than to destroy her. Than to bestow upon her the emptiness he feels. She is fully capable of handling him in her mind when the lights are out and the world is quiet but when her dreams slowly begin to bring him to life, the world she had known begins to unravel. 
          
          Sneak peek:
            Aurora jumped back, tripping on her heels and falling to the ground. She winced at the cold, icy ache of the snow which numbed her hands as she dragged herself father away from the man. Nonetheless he pursued her, growing closer with each step he took. The man loomed over her, his smile intensified. The corners of his mouth had stretched up so far that Aurora thought his face might burst. She was still on the snowy pavement, her eyes wide and laced with alarm. She swallowed hard as she took in this mans demeanor. 
          
          He extended a hand towards Aurora, his fingertips ghosting over the side of her pale face. She quite visibly stiffened. His eyes were stern and lifeless as he stared at her.
          
          "You have no recollection of me do you?" He asked, his smile turning bitter.

unwanted_queen

Hey I'm currently reading Living with the bad boy and I absolutely love check out my book Runner when you get the chance please.

jordyn-ackles

Will do! Thanks for reading I'm currently brainstorming ideas for the next chapter, haven't been on watt pad in a while so yeah. Anyways I will totally check it out
Reply

jordyn-ackles

LIVING WITH THE BAD BOY.. PLEASE READ IN REGARDS TO THE NEXT UPDATE 
          So I didnt want to get your guys' hopes up by writing another authors note and leading you to believe its a new chapter! I just wanted to inform you that the mext update will be around may 8th because I have an AP exam on the 6th and need to devote my time to studying for that exam. I will most likely update more frequently after this exam on may 6th because my AP work will begin to die down. Thanks for reading!