jovi_fangirl

Hey! You inspired me to write, I just posted the first few chapters of my bon jovi book, no one has been reading it and I need some advice or feedback.

ANNOUNCEMENTS!
          
          Firstly, chapter 29 of born to be my baby is out. Secondly, I have a new story out.
          
          It's still about Jon and Amelia but it's small standalone stories that we don't see BTBMB. There'll be a lot of chapters about the times when they first met and their first 4 years together. I felt pretty sad I never got to write about when they were younger, so now I can
          
          Also, once BTBMB is finished I'm sure I'll write about much of their future together, just small chapters here and there.
          
          And other stories that I never managed to fit into t
          it for the sake of pacing. Birthdays, Christmases, dates etc.
          
          With my older story Edge of a Broken Heart I sorta just wrote EVERYTHING into it. I don't want to do that in BTBMB for pacing, but I would still like to include Jon and Amelia moments that don't necessarily advance the plot.
          
          So you can check out my new story 'Made to be your Man' on my profile  it would mean a lot, and if you like born to be my baby then I'm sure you'll like that too.

Uhh why does the word document I write my stories in say I've spent 909 hours writing Born to be my Baby....
          
          It's all that procrastinating I do staring at the wall 

Really sorry about the lack of recent updates, I've not been well recently. Not sure when the next chapter will be up but I promise it IS coming lol

That heart attack when wattpad logs you out and you don't know the password to your old email lmao

Posted chapter twelve of born to be my baby :))

Chapter 10 of Born to be my Baby is out now :)

Chapters 8 & 9 of Born to be my Baby are out now :)

Hello everyone, sorry for the delay in new chapters, I'm changing everything I've written previously to be in third person so it's taking some time but hopefully the result is more enjoyable in the end :)) and when I do post, which hopefully shouldn't be too long away, I'll have two new chapters up :)

Question: Do you prefer reading in first person or third person? Because I've been writing some chapters in third person and I've been really enjoying it and I'm almost considering writing my new story in it (hehe) :)) but I would appreciate all your feedback very much! I'm completely open to writing it in first person if that's what people want.
          I know that first person can feel more personal but I feel like third person is more professional and good for writing lots of characters emotions without switching to their POV.