R u open to criticism? Like dont take my words to heart but i hate it when authors adds a pointless female charachter whose ONLY point in the story is to cause a rift between the main charachters and nothing else. Thats exactly what the case was with treasure. Like ik you maybe wanted to spice things up but that was js pointless to add a female charachter like that imo. I wouldn't complain if she actually did something important to the story other than angst but no, all she did was js angst and a few extra chapters. Like erwin walking in on them could've been better than that, saving you the effort to make a whole extra charachter. Yes, would've been cheesy and cockblocking but yh ykwim?
Im not hating tho, its just that treasure thing kinda turned me off from the book. Again, im not hating its just that i wanted to point out smth ive seen A LOT of authors do
Ik i yapped