itsiceebaby

 Hello Author, I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to share that I’ve read your stories, and they are all very good. However, I noticed that your writing style could still be improved, particularly in terms of grammar and sentence structure. I believe you have great potential, and with a bit more refinement, your work can become even stronger. I hope you won’t take this feedback negatively and it’s simply meant to encourage growth. Thank you, and I’m rooting for you.
          
          

bulmabulma22

As of now ..I'm reading when she is gone ..and to be honest sobrang Ganda talaga Ng daloy Ng story..sana maayos mo na lng ung pagkakasulat..hindi ko iniinsulto gawa mo..again ask a reader na marami ng nabasa ..suggest lang naman un NASA iyo naman if tingnan mo..thanks have a nice day

joylabs02

@bulmabulma22 thanks bhe sa iyong opinion,and sa pagsabi sa dapat kung ibago,im expecting a lot of error since bago palang ako,i really appreciate sa sinabi mo,and thank you for reading my story and sharing it.Salamat sa suggestion at feedback mo,i will try my best na mapa improve ko ang writing ko.THANK YOU...GODBLESS
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