MoisesSophiaTrading
I like your story Ang ganda
LanceArzadon
Miss update kan Po please
elchermer20
ms. author update naman kayo ohh ...ang gabmnda kasi ng mga story mo...sana makapag update ka...
bulmabulma22
Hnd kc a mpakali Ng hnd q nassabi puna or opinion s nbbasa q..hahaha
bulmabulma22
Ok lng..hnd po s nagmamagaleng hnd nmn kc aq naging author or writer bale opinion lng kc iun..I love reading kc..sana maimprove ung s writing skill ... marami Kang naiisip n stories sna mkpg sulat kpa Ng marami..godbless
bulmabulma22
As of now ..I'm reading when she is gone ..and to be honest sobrang Ganda talaga Ng daloy Ng story..sana maayos mo na lng ung pagkakasulat..hindi ko iniinsulto gawa mo..again ask a reader na marami ng nabasa ..suggest lang naman un NASA iyo naman if tingnan mo..thanks have a nice day
joylabs02
@bulmabulma22 thanks bhe sa iyong opinion,and sa pagsabi sa dapat kung ibago,im expecting a lot of error since bago palang ako,i really appreciate sa sinabi mo,and thank you for reading my story and sharing it.Salamat sa suggestion at feedback mo,i will try my best na mapa improve ko ang writing ko.THANK YOU...GODBLESS
bulmabulma22
Maganda ung plot Saka daloy Ng story ..kaya lng nalilito Ako kung sino na Ang nagssalita..suggest ko n I bold Letter mo na lng ung mgssalita..paayos na Rin Ng pag gamit Ng punctuation mark..sorry ha? Ask a reader marami na Rin aq nababasa na stories maganda sana stories un nga lang medyo sably lng sa sulat
joylabs02
@bulmabulma22 Thanks bhe i appreciate ur feedback,i will try harder to improve my writings thanks for reading