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Hi @jpsuchecki,
          
          I just read your latest chapter and I have to say the atmosphere is incredible. Adreanna’s dark, divine energy, the torture sequence, and the mythology around Lilith, Typhon, and the beasts are written with real intensity. Your world-building feels rich and cinematic, almost like a mix of high fantasy and grimdark.
          
          A couple of things I wanted to ask as a reader:
          Will the story continue with a villain-focused POV, or will we switch perspectives later?
          Are Lilith and Typhon part of a larger pantheon we’ll get to explore?
          And is Goldale’s fall going to be a single major arc, or part of a longer war?
          
          Also side note: your story has huge visual potential. The purple magic, the beast designs, Adreanna’s whole aesthetic, the masks all of it would look amazing in character art or a dramatic cover.
          
          I’m a professional artist (covers, character portraits, fantasy illustrations), so if you want visuals to go with the story, I’d love to share ideas or samples. No pressure at all just support.

I'm so close to finishing my book, and then I sprain my wrist. Go figure...

Third chapter out this week. I don't know if its because I've been off for the holidays or I'm so close to the end, but if feels like I've accomplished a lot. 
          
          For all of you who have been reading, thank you. You're awesome. 
          
          Chapter 31 of Chain of Memories: Through Hallowed Eyes
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1591899065-chain-of-memories-chapter-thirty-one-through

New chapter of Chain of Memories Out.  
          
          That's two chapters this week. We're getting so close to the end. I have at least two more left (maybe three, will see). I expect the next one to be long, as it will reach the climax of Kesi's story arc for the book. Please enjoy and give me some feedback. You guys are excellent, and I can't do this without you.
          
          Chapter 30 of Chain of Memories: What She Did Not Mean
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1591804287-chain-of-memories-chapter-thirty-what-she-did-not

I started writing this chapter 2 months ago. Finished most of it, then stopped and redid it all. I hope it's a lot better. Please give it a read. 
          
          Presenting Chapter Twenty-Nine in the Book: Chain of Memories is The Dreamer's Dream.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1591367295-chain-of-memories-chapter-twenty-nine-the

Since going back and rewriting the Matriarch's Daughter, I had to unplublish book 2 and 3 to fix all the problems that were created by changing the first book so much. Slowly, I'm starting to get it out again. I hope you take a look at it. 
          
          Here's The Matriarch's Daughter Part Two: The Rise of Adreanna. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1443884821-the-rise-of-adreanna-prologue/page/2

Hey everyone! I want to plug in my friend who is starting a new book @DarrianMackenzie. 
          
          Instead of the poor fighting each other for the entertainment of the rich, we have the rich fighting each other for the entertainment (among other things) for the poor. She's looking for feedback on the first chapter. It short, so please give it a read and at least answer her one survey question at the bottom. 
          
          Thanks for all your help. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/403379641-the-wicked-age-of-sonder

Been doing some editing on my stories. I wrote myself into a problem and its taken me quite a bit to fix it. Anyway, I'm about done and I got to reading my chapter the Cartographer and Engineer chapter. It is perhaps the meanest thing I've ever written. 
          
          Does anyone else feel bad about what they do to their good characters?

It has been a crazy day. For three days I've been dealing with a simple flat tire. Somehow I picked up a wire after work two days ago. Dropped it off at the place, had my wife pick me up. Said they would get to it in the morning. Wife took me to work. Called around noon when I didn't hear. Guy said he didn't even know they had it. So more waiting. 
          
          Guy calls, says its fine. Didn't even charge me. Okay, no big deal. Woke up today. Tire flat. Great. Take it back to the place. Guy says, tire needs replaced. I wanted to know why he didn't know that yesterday. Why am I still wasting my time? He doesn't know. Wants $155 +tax and serivce (for almost 250) to replace. Say, no. Take it to walmart. They said they can patch it. Okay, so wait.  Three hours later. Nothing. Call. No one answers. Go back, oh we can't fix it. We need to replace it. Me: Why didn't you call me? Them: we did. Show me number. It's wrong. Fine. Please fix it. Still have to wait 2 hours. Finally done. Get home, new car light.
          
          Please change your oil. 
          
          GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
          
          Anyway, give me an idea for my chapter title. Here's Chain of Memories Chapter Twenty Eight: The Day That Never Ends. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1566106387-chain-of-memories-chapter-twenty-eight-the-day

It's been a month, but I just completed a new chapter of Chain of Memories. I think I might have four or five more chapters of this book. I'll be getting an update soon after I do edits. I'm really looking forward to having this one done.