jpsuchecki

Had a strange interaction with Reddit. Posted on there, looking for feedback, and put my cover art on there (this is the first time I've posted my coverart). They took it down and said they don't allow AI artwork or publications. I guess they must be talking about the cover art? It is AI, but since I couldn't ask them, I was hoping they didn't think my story was AI. I use Grammarly for my story, but it's all my idea and mostly (minus the improvements Grammarly suggests) writing. 
          	
          	I guess this is the age we live in now. Many of you are more talented than I. I hope you're not being accused of anything. For those of you who are reading my story, thank you for your support. The work has been long spent these past few years. 
          	
          	Enjoy a new chapter of The Thirty-Third: Trusting What's Real. 
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1602135022-the-thirty-third-chapter-two-trusting-what%27s-real

jpsuchecki

@angeldawn09 Thank you. That's very kind of you to say. I hope your books are going well. 
          	  
          	  Also, always up for r4r if your still interested.
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angeldawn09

@jpsuchecki The frustration of inner critic is real. I use Grammarly as well as my grammar is terrible without, but the rest of my writing is me. Though reading other books, my own always falls short in comparison and people type so much faster. Also stings a bit more when knowing I'm older than most of the people books that I'm reading oof. 
          	  
          	  I remember reading a bit of your story the Call Of The Beachwick some time ago for a r4r, and I do remember you had a way with words and vocabulary. Don't sell yourself short. Each completed book is an accomplishment:) 
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Worldd_Of_Paradisee

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jpsuchecki

Had a strange interaction with Reddit. Posted on there, looking for feedback, and put my cover art on there (this is the first time I've posted my coverart). They took it down and said they don't allow AI artwork or publications. I guess they must be talking about the cover art? It is AI, but since I couldn't ask them, I was hoping they didn't think my story was AI. I use Grammarly for my story, but it's all my idea and mostly (minus the improvements Grammarly suggests) writing. 
          
          I guess this is the age we live in now. Many of you are more talented than I. I hope you're not being accused of anything. For those of you who are reading my story, thank you for your support. The work has been long spent these past few years. 
          
          Enjoy a new chapter of The Thirty-Third: Trusting What's Real. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1602135022-the-thirty-third-chapter-two-trusting-what%27s-real

jpsuchecki

@angeldawn09 Thank you. That's very kind of you to say. I hope your books are going well. 
            
            Also, always up for r4r if your still interested.
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angeldawn09

@jpsuchecki The frustration of inner critic is real. I use Grammarly as well as my grammar is terrible without, but the rest of my writing is me. Though reading other books, my own always falls short in comparison and people type so much faster. Also stings a bit more when knowing I'm older than most of the people books that I'm reading oof. 
            
            I remember reading a bit of your story the Call Of The Beachwick some time ago for a r4r, and I do remember you had a way with words and vocabulary. Don't sell yourself short. Each completed book is an accomplishment:) 
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jpsuchecki

I already made changes to chapter 1 of the Thirty-Third. Apparently, though I had spelled it right everywhere else, on the actual book title, I spelled Thirty as 'Thirity." Go figure. 
          
          Anyway, had the day off yesterday, so I spent most of the day writing chapter 1. Poor Kesi is having a rough time. I think she needs some support. Also, there is a not-so-secret plot line there I'm going to reveal in the next chapter, but I think most people should be able to figure it out. Hope you enjoy.
          
          The Thirty-Third: Chapter One: Over Extended. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1601397534-the-thirty-third-chapter-one-overextended

jpsuchecki

I'm excited to start the last book in the Call of the Beachwick Trilogy. 
          
          I've been sitting on this for about a month because I wasn't sure where to start. I know how it's going to end, but the beginning and middle have been alluding me. As always, the answer came to be while I was doing some mundane task that had nothing to do with plotting or working on my book. 
          
          Surprisingly, once I saw the answer, I was frustrated with myself for not thinking of it earlier. I had even laid the groundwork. I guess it do be like that sometimes. Anyway, here is the first chapter of the final story of Aurelia and Kesi's journey regarding their family's legacy:
          
          The Third-Thirty: Selmarah
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/406288301-the-thirty-third

jpsuchecki

Final Chapter of Chain of Memories. I might do some editing later, slow down the end of the book. I wouldn't mind some feedback to let me know if you think it's too fast-paced. For now, I'm glad it's finished. I will have a short epilogue, then maybe after Christmas, I will start writing the final book in the trilogy. 
          
          For those of you who have been reading the book, I thank you. You mean the world to me. I hope to hear from you, share your thoughts, and grow from any feedback you give me. 
          
          For now, enjoy Chapter 34 of Chain of Memories: The End of the Dream of Dreams.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1595555851-chain-of-memories-chapter-thirty-four-the-end-of

jpsuchecki

Action-packed chapter right here. There was a moment in the Call of the Beachwick which had a thing that a lot of people responded positively to, but also pointed out that it was kind of a deus ex machina moment. I agreed that, based on events, it certainly seemed that way. There is always a lot going on that I'm setting up in the long run, that might not be apparent. The devil is in the details. I gave a lot more details this time around, trying to point out to people what exactly that was. Now, this final chapter brings it to a close, which should completely explain a plot in the previous book. 
          
          Anyway, I hope you enjoy. Presenting, Chain of Memories Chapter 33: The Thirty-First. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1594503169-chain-of-memories-chapter-thirty-three-the-thirty/page/5

jpsuchecki

Well its been a long ten days, but I was mostly finished with this chapter before I broke (not sprained) my wrist. I'm so excited for some of the action going on here. I've been thinking about this moment sense I started writing.
          
          With maybe a chapter (and epilogue? idk we will see) left here is Chapter 32 of Chain of Memories:
          
          The Schemer's Scheme. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1593218494-chain-of-memories-chapter-thirty-two-the-schemer%27s

KitCorbeau

@jpsuchecki Lol that's how I felt about allergies. Everyone but me in the family had them, then I hit 30 and suddenly the universe was like 'Here, have a dust allergy as a present.' lmao
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jpsuchecki

@KitCorbeau Yeah, it sucks. Never broken anything before and now that I'm a week away from 42...
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KitCorbeau

@jpsuchecki Oh my gosh! I hope you are alright O.o take it easy and don't push yourself too hard.
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Patlangley

Hi @jpsuchecki,
          
          I just read your latest chapter and I have to say the atmosphere is incredible. Adreanna’s dark, divine energy, the torture sequence, and the mythology around Lilith, Typhon, and the beasts are written with real intensity. Your world-building feels rich and cinematic, almost like a mix of high fantasy and grimdark.
          
          A couple of things I wanted to ask as a reader:
          Will the story continue with a villain-focused POV, or will we switch perspectives later?
          Are Lilith and Typhon part of a larger pantheon we’ll get to explore?
          And is Goldale’s fall going to be a single major arc, or part of a longer war?
          
          Also side note: your story has huge visual potential. The purple magic, the beast designs, Adreanna’s whole aesthetic, the masks all of it would look amazing in character art or a dramatic cover.
          
          I’m a professional artist (covers, character portraits, fantasy illustrations), so if you want visuals to go with the story, I’d love to share ideas or samples. No pressure at all just support.

Patlangley

@jpsuchecki Thank you for the reply! 
            I completely understand, and no worries at all. I’ll keep reading and let the story unfold on its own. You’re doing a great job so far, and I’m excited to see where it goes.
            If you ever feel like discussing ideas in the future, I’m always happy to chat.
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jpsuchecki

@Patlangley Thank you for reading the first part of my story. I would encourage you to read the rest to find answers to your questions. While I appreciate your offer to discuss visual potential, at the moment, that isn't what I'm looking for.
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