Hi @jpsuchecki,
I just read your latest chapter and I have to say the atmosphere is incredible. Adreanna’s dark, divine energy, the torture sequence, and the mythology around Lilith, Typhon, and the beasts are written with real intensity. Your world-building feels rich and cinematic, almost like a mix of high fantasy and grimdark.
A couple of things I wanted to ask as a reader:
Will the story continue with a villain-focused POV, or will we switch perspectives later?
Are Lilith and Typhon part of a larger pantheon we’ll get to explore?
And is Goldale’s fall going to be a single major arc, or part of a longer war?
Also side note: your story has huge visual potential. The purple magic, the beast designs, Adreanna’s whole aesthetic, the masks all of it would look amazing in character art or a dramatic cover.
I’m a professional artist (covers, character portraits, fantasy illustrations), so if you want visuals to go with the story, I’d love to share ideas or samples. No pressure at all just support.