jpsuchecki

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FaeSparks

Hi! I noticed that you write thoughtful critiques of stories; currently editing someone else's work and I noticed our comments lined up, haha. After reading your bio, I thought I might throw my hat into the ring. I write supernatural romance and I'd love some feedback on the worldbuilding, character relationships, etc. of one of my stories. If supernatural romance isn't your cup of tea, no worries! I'm open to reading & critiquing anything of yours as well. And if you can't get to it right now, no worries, my offer to read/edit one of yours still stands. Just let me know!

FaeSparks

@jpsuchecki Thank you! If you would try out Grasp Heart, I'd appreciate it. Again, take your time! I've critiqued two chapters of The Matriarch's Daughter; let me know if my review-style is compatible with what you were looking for. I look forward to hopefully continuing this with you!
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jpsuchecki

@FaeSparks lol sorry. I mean what are you looking for? But it looks like you've answered. Lmk what book you want me to start on.
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FaeSparks

What am I looking at? You mean what I saw in your bio or your style of critiquing? Sorry, I didn't quite understand. If you're referencing your works, I was thinking of starting with The Matriarch's Daughter. 
            
            As for how many chapters in a day, I'm not to bothered by rate of work so long as someone sticks with it to the end with me. Personally, I only have 2-3 hours at the end of the day to both engage with the community and focus on my own work so I can get maybe a chapter a day at most. A line-edit critique of someone's first chapter took me 3 sit-downs across a full weekend. I also give feedback as I go along as to what I think the themes, character development, and worldbuilding may be - just so you have an idea of whether readers are picking up what you're putting down. 
            
            I have no trouble getting started on reading a chapter or two with my time tonight to see if you're satisfied with my critiquing style. If not, please don't feel pressured to reciprocate!
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GeorgianaBMaria

Hello,
          
          I know it was a while ago since we exchanged stories, but if you’re still interested in R4R and V4V, I did my part for the moment.
          I’ll appreciate an answer considering it.
          
          Have a great day/night! :>

jpsuchecki

@GeorgianaBMaria Thank you. No, I'm not doing R4R right now. If you want a V4V I can do that for you. Its the least I can do.
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jpsuchecki

Hey everyone. I started writing my first book, "The Matriarch's Daughter" in the summer of 2020, completing its first draft about a year later. A year after that, I reworked it, making tremendous changes. I love the story, but I have always had a single problem with it: The timeline. It's just too long, it offers too many jumps, takes too long to introduce the antagonist, makes it hard to write a coherent message. 
          The books that are after it are so much better, but it's hard to get people to read those, because the problems the first book suffers from. 
          
          This week I think I came up with a solution that will bring down my word count (form 106,000 words) and fix the timeline. For a moment, I'm putting my other books on pause to improve my first. I hope you will read it when it comes. Thank you all for being patient. 
          
          In the meantime, I will continue to post updates on "Into the Mist." Nothing about that will change. I hope you enjoy. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1473878429-into-the-mist-chapter-four-playing-the-man