I'm thinking about posting a story called Christmas Soldier. Here's the summary:
It's been two years since Sergeant Major Sage Montgomery was deployed. It's been two years since Grace Cameron had to say goodbye to her fiancé. While he's fighting for his country, she's fighting for her sanity. With many failed attempts behind her, Grace has to come to a decision about her life. Can Grace go much longer without her partner by her side? And how much more can Sage take of being away from the one he loves?
Can you please read the little that's up and help give me suggestions? Should I continue? I like the story line but I need some pointer. Especially some for improving the summary >_<