katpuglisi
I'm liking 23 so far, however, you kind of jump between tenses, present to past and back again. Otherwise, pretty good!
katpuglisi
Thank you for putting my book on one of your reading lists! Funny, I too wrote books when I was young, and very young (They weren't very happy. Unless murder and death an dying is happy for a kindergartner). I plan on reading your stories as well!
juhames
Oh no problem! I really liked the little blurb and I was like heck yeah I'm going to read that! And thank you for putting my book on yours as well! <3
ohiostategirl07
I just wanted to thank you for all of your great comments! They really made me want to keep writing and writing. I'm really happy you like my story, so chapter 9 has been dedicated to you. I hope you have an awesome day and that you enjoy your chapter. Let me know what you think. :)
juhames
You're very welcome! I love your writing so it makes it pretty easy to just obsess over in the comments. Omg!? Thank you! I have never had a chapter dedicated towards me! I will definitely read it right now! Thank you much again! @ohiostategirl07
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totally-tumblr
Sorry there was no new part to my story today, I was a bit busy. Stay awesome
juhames
@totally-tumblr Omg! You didn't have too! I'll read it asap and give you feedback. :*
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totally-tumblr
@juhames I ended up posting a quick chapter out of guilt. But I did introduce a new character. Feedback maybe?
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juhames
@totally-tumblr Hey, don't worry! Adding everyday is a lot, so I totally understand if you can't. :P Stay awesome. :*
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totally-tumblr
Hi, I would like to thank you on the message you posted about liking my story. That really boosted my confidence and I was smiling the rest of the day!
juhames
@totally-tumblr You're totally welcome! I can't wait to read the rest of your story. You honestly inspired me to write my own hunger games. I have been creating and reading the hunger games so much when the series came out and you make me want to make some series. :)
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