katpuglisi

I'm liking 23 so far, however, you kind of jump between tenses, present to past and back again. Otherwise, pretty good!

juhames

I know. It was really bad when I first realized it. Trust me when I say that it was worse. I am still trying to fix all the tenses. Sorry about that. ☹️ and thank you! 
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katpuglisi

Thank you for putting my book on one of your reading lists! Funny, I too wrote books when I was young, and very young (They weren't very happy. Unless murder and death an dying is happy for a kindergartner). I plan on reading your stories as well!

juhames

Your very welcome!  I guess we all have the really creative time when we were young lol 
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Darkened_Forests

Thank you for adding my story to your list of reads for the future <3 <3 really means an insane amount to me and I will be sure to check out your story as well !

juhames

Oh no problem! I really liked the little blurb and I was like heck yeah I'm going to read that! And thank you for putting my book on yours as well! <3
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ohiostategirl07

I just wanted to thank you for all of your great comments! They really made me want to keep writing and writing. I'm really happy you like my story, so chapter 9 has been dedicated to you. I hope you have an awesome day and that you enjoy your chapter. Let me know what you think.  :)

juhames

You're very welcome! I love your writing so it makes it pretty easy to just obsess over in the comments. Omg!? Thank you! I have never had a chapter dedicated towards me! I will definitely read it right now! Thank you much again!  @ohiostategirl07
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totally-tumblr

Sorry there was no new part to my story today, I was a bit busy. Stay awesome 

juhames

@totally-tumblr Omg! You didn't have too! I'll read it asap and give you feedback. :*
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totally-tumblr

@juhames I ended up posting a quick chapter out of guilt.  But I did introduce a new character.  Feedback maybe?
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juhames

@totally-tumblr Hey, don't worry! Adding everyday is a lot, so I totally understand if you can't. :P 
            
            Stay awesome. :*
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totally-tumblr

Hi, I would like to thank you on the message you posted about liking my story.  That really boosted my confidence and I was smiling the rest of the day! 
          

juhames

@totally-tumblr You're totally welcome! I can't wait to read the rest of your story. You honestly inspired me to write my own hunger games. I have been creating and reading the hunger games so much when the series came out and you make me want to make some series. :)
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