julia-payton-author

Just deleted the first scene of my third chapter. It just wasn’t working for me and I think it revealed too much. But I’m reworking the whole story anyway, so I have a feeling I’m gonna be doing a lot of revising! 😅

Really struggling with this chapter! It’s a rough draft but I may change most everything about it. Any feedback is so appreciated. 😁

Reading an amazing story by @xpolos! 

Hey there! I’ll be posting a rough draft of my current novel. I would love some feedback. Please let me know if the story isn’t working for you. If there’s something that gets boring or slow, please tell me. I give comments as much as I love to receive them, so please feel free to message me.