juliecotewriter

Now that we've properly met her, I'm excited to share a picture of Radi over on Instagram!
          	
          	https://www.instagram.com/p/DTWHR4Oieq0/

PeacocksQueen

@juliecotewriter Oh! I have a different photo for her…lol. I’ll send it on messenger…lol
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juliecotewriter

@PeacocksQueen It's the same girl, I just asked it to put her in a forest and give her a hood!
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PeacocksQueen

@juliecotewriter OMGosh!! I like it! It’s better than the one I did!!
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juliecotewriter

Now that we've properly met her, I'm excited to share a picture of Radi over on Instagram!
          
          https://www.instagram.com/p/DTWHR4Oieq0/

PeacocksQueen

@juliecotewriter Oh! I have a different photo for her…lol. I’ll send it on messenger…lol
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juliecotewriter

@PeacocksQueen It's the same girl, I just asked it to put her in a forest and give her a hood!
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PeacocksQueen

@juliecotewriter OMGosh!! I like it! It’s better than the one I did!!
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juliecotewriter

Hey everyone!
          
          Friday snuck up on me this week! The next Through the North chapter is ready, but I completely forget to set it to publish today and I won't have a chance to do it at work. I promise, I will get the chapter posted as soon as I can this evening!

juliecotewriter

I just put together a guide book chapter about the Northern Kingdoms, so we can have all of Tanden's ramblings in one place!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1585330001-a-guide-to-zianna-northern-kingdoms
          
          I'll work on the Southern kingdoms next weekend.
          
          Also, go see Tolliver over on instagram! 
          
          https://www.instagram.com/p/DQR9_yFCSZv/

PeacocksQueen

@juliecotewriter This is awesome! Can’t wait to read it!
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yukishan777

@juliecotewriter Oh...I understand...sorry, again.... I'll try better in this book. But ask for the read for read. If you think we should continue then I will. I don't mind reading but I wouldn't want to force you into reading my book because we had a read for read deal. If we discontinue, I would be totally reading for my own enjoyment 

juliecotewriter

@yukishan777 Yes, I understood what you meant by "bland and two dimensional". The reason I felt that feedback was unfair was because you said it after reading the first chapter those characters were introduced. You didn't actually take any time to see how Finn gets to know them over the next few chapters. If you had still felt that way after reading further along, I would have been interested to hear why.   Unfortunately, that isn't what happened.

yukishan777

@juliecotewriter Hi...sorry for not responding. Life has just been chaotic for me in these past months and I think I delivered the baggage on your doorstep. I'd like to apologise for my rudeness. At times I tend to be raw in my reviews about people's books instead of actually advising on how to improve their writing and for that I am truly sorry. 
          
          What I meant by bland and two dimensional was that the characters felt more like archetypes in my opinion like they're there to serve Tannax instead of existing by themselves. At the moment Fin and Tannax are the most flesh out character at the moment, but I'd like if the knights were fleshed out a bit more. At the moment I just know their choice of weapons and little about them, but I'd like it if Fin would spend more time with each knights so I'd get to know them more. Right now I feel like if any of them were to die I wouldn't feel any emotion as I haven't connected with them as much yet...sorry If I'm vague and rude