juniafterdark

Okay so I’m having a lot of thoughts and I would love your alls opinions on it. I just talked to one of my online friends about my story. Some of my earlier chapters, to me, are a little underwhelming compared to how I write now. Do you guys think the earlier chapters before the safehouse and the very beginning of Harry & Luna coming to the safehouse should be changed? I don’t mean changing anything dramatically, just creating imagery better and explaining better. I just feel like a lot of people might unfortunately give up on my story due to it being underwhelming at the start, and in turn, they’d miss out on the later chapters. Let me know what you think please! 

harrysssfineline

Personally I loved how the beginning of safe house was wrote it made sense to me and I wake able to picture the place or the scenery but it could be different for other people
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juniafterdark

Okay so I’m having a lot of thoughts and I would love your alls opinions on it. I just talked to one of my online friends about my story. Some of my earlier chapters, to me, are a little underwhelming compared to how I write now. Do you guys think the earlier chapters before the safehouse and the very beginning of Harry & Luna coming to the safehouse should be changed? I don’t mean changing anything dramatically, just creating imagery better and explaining better. I just feel like a lot of people might unfortunately give up on my story due to it being underwhelming at the start, and in turn, they’d miss out on the later chapters. Let me know what you think please! 

harrysssfineline

Personally I loved how the beginning of safe house was wrote it made sense to me and I wake able to picture the place or the scenery but it could be different for other people
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