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cool cool it was bugging me from the beginning hence I thought it is better to confirm than speculate. 

It’s not AI, all ideas and scenes are original, for some words synonyms are used and there’s still editing to be done. 
            
            Hope you like it, though I know many people who mention specifically that they’ve used AI and there books have millions or reads, so if I used it (I have used it for image generation though) I would’ve mentioned.
            
            The dialogues are not overly dramatic speeches, I’ve tried to put across the emotion in lesser words and elaborated the feeling to make it less dramatic and boring maybe
            
            Awaiting comments while you’re reading
            This is my first book so feedback matters a lot after something is published for the readers

@1310reads Hey, so I was reading and realised writing style of this book is not like other books. Just to be sure, have you used AI to write or edit the chapters? The short sentences and rhythm of the dialogues are overly formal and in a very structured manner. Most of the content feels robotic while reading.

@junkyard080 
            
            Greetings,
            
            First of all, I am so sorry for such a delayed reply. I may have accidentally missed this reply of yours among the notifications, and I only came across this now.
            
            ank you so much for taking the time to write all of this. Reading your comments genuinely made me smile.
            
            What makes me happiest is not just that you enjoyed the story, but that you noticed the small details, connections, and threads woven throughout the books. A lot of thought goes into those little things, so seeing a reader pick them up and get excited about them is incredibly rewarding.
            
            I'm also glad the characters resonated with you. Every reader ends up connecting with different people in the story, and it is always interesting to see which ones leave the strongest impression.
            
            As for the universe itself, it was built gradually over a long period of time. Many ideas existed separately at first and were connected piece by piece as the story grew. There is still a lot happening behind the scenes that never makes it onto the page, but it helps me keep everything linked together.
            
            And please don't feel bad about missing details. Most readers miss things on their first read. In fact, some connections are intentionally subtle and are meant to become clearer only later.
            
            Thank you again for giving the Secrets Duology a chance and for sharing such a thoughtful response. Support and enthusiasm like yours make all the time spent writing worthwhile.
            
            I hope you continue enjoying the journey ahead.
            
            Warm regards,
            Alankrita

@memorycraver Just had a realisation, how I came across your book. Blasting Saraswati? I think there was a wattpad banner on home page? Or an instagram reel for this book? I don't remember but I added that book in library and was stalking your wattpad profile. Crazy description of book and tada inhaled both books lol.

@memorycraver Girl, I don't even remember how I came across this book. I was angry and fed up with recycled plot on wattpad and was eager to try something, anything new. This book - I assumed it was complete duo logy hence I started reading, I didn't know 2nd book was ongoing here. 
            
            Best book this now here. Plot twists? Unexpected. Female lead and characters? Badass women who I loved a lot. Devan? Weirdly intriguing cute manipulative ass pit bull. I was hooked, I have not slept on time for 2 days, I was reading it till 5 am and slept only when realised how late it was. 
            
            I think I have commented idk how many times and god knows what because I was so fucking excited to know what's next. I was going to find you on instagram and nag you lol. 
            I want to know when you started writing, how you made this entire universe, how was the process, behind the scenes, inside your brain. To map all those things from first book to second book. You did reply to multiple people who focus and read since everything is connected and to see that? to realise that was mind fucking blowing. Your brain must be a pretty amazing place, helped you write this masterpiece. I was super pissed at myself when I was missing details, forgetting tiny things and was so fucking happy when I realised Inu & K connection because god it was bugging me for so long, how how can he first stalk her and then her. 
            
            Best reading experience ever. Also, to add this book for real is on my mind. My brain is continuing your story for 2 days when I am sleeping. It is like all the characters are in my dream and they are continuing the plot, like a movie. I think I am going crazy lol, should have not inhaled both books so fast. 
            
            Also, the poems? Girl, crazy work with those poems. Crazy work with the entire story girl.

@Ishira_777 thank you so so much 

@Ishira_777 thankss will add it in library 

@ariaa_archives yup I like everything till now, that was the only thing that was giving me an ick. I know it is a joke maybe it is just me who felt like it lol. Love an independent girly for us, thanks for writing.

@ariaa_archives okay thank u so much dear, but as you said it was a joke made by her friend (kriya). I'll make sure not to repeat the same thing or lines. And regarding the independence thing, the FL is strong and you will learn more about her character and life. You'll see her as a career oriented person in the upcoming chapters and also take decisions based on freedom and financial independency. The story has just started. But I appreciate you for taking out your time and giving me a honest review. I'll try to correct it. Hope you stay along with me and the characters throughout the book.❤️

@ariaa_archives Till now - I think everything is cool till now - I just don't like the repetition of how she'll go to that party and bag a billionaire. Life is not about finding rich men only to fall in love. Idea of thinking about networking was cool but pls do not make it all about finding a boy. We girls are independent and can live our life alone as well, we don't need any man for that. Joking about it once is what friends do, chanting same thing again and again is annoying.  (YOU SAID YOU WANTED HONEST REVIEW)

@ariaa_archives what's the update schedule?