just-breethe

I have scheduled three chapters instead of two for 5PM EST today because one chapter is quite short! My apologies for the short chapter.

just-breethe

I have edited my prologue and the first two chapters of The Scars of Aether. The writing feels more like me, and I got over my fear of using em dashes. (I was afraid people would tell me my writing was AI) 
          I also received some critique about how Elizabeth didn't feel 9 years old. So, I decided to just go through it and produce a second draft. :) Help yourself if you're interested.
          
          Happy Day!

CFR1819

@just-breethe  Oh ok, yes I know how you feel I changed my beginnings and endings of each chapter to connect more and I tried my best to leave cliffhangers, which I need to work on ugh I will try to read some more tomorrow. It's always good to keep editing but also I heard too much editing can hurt our books too lol It's tough. The writing process.
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just-breethe

I'm working on editing and re-vamping earlier chapters of The Scars of Aether, so please keep an eye out for these changes if you're interested in what I improve. :)

just-breethe

On the Reddit discord server they mentioned that Wattpad is having some internal server issues.
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CFR1819

@just-breethe It's great I can't wait to read it. That's what I did with Neon Teens and Funky Beats. Still working on it. 
            By the way are you experiencing issues posting your new chapters? Because it won't let me maybe wattpad is experiencing technical difficulties today
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