just91

English readers, I’m new to the English community in here so I really appreciate your feedback on my work~
          	Any kinds of questions, tips or comments would be appreciated .

just91

Not exactly but thank you for your recommendation; I’ll keep it in my mind
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shiberplushi

@just91 if you are making your work mysterious, my personal suggestion is to leave hint in every chapters
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shiberplushi

@just91 you asked me for a feedback through this english community right? did I join this community I don't recall anything like this
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just91

English readers, I’m new to the English community in here so I really appreciate your feedback on my work~
          Any kinds of questions, tips or comments would be appreciated .

just91

Not exactly but thank you for your recommendation; I’ll keep it in my mind
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shiberplushi

@just91 if you are making your work mysterious, my personal suggestion is to leave hint in every chapters
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shiberplushi

@just91 you asked me for a feedback through this english community right? did I join this community I don't recall anything like this
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