Sereneflow

Hey hi!! I am a new writer, writing my first story. Can you please read and comment on it so that helps me gain some review. It would be a great help if you give me some insights. If you are into mystery and romance please give it a try.
          
          Aditya and Tanisha find themselves meeting again and again despite wanting nothing more than staying away from each other. Aditya is a special crime branch head chasing a crime while Tanisha is a school teacher running away from a secret.
          Circumstances lead them to meet each other for a small time forming a truce only to get seperated again.
          But this time, Aditya decides to marry her. What made him take that decision? And how is she going to react to it? 
          What happened to the case he is solving?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390516339

_Athira

Hey dear,
          Thank you so much for your constant love and support — it truly means a lot to me. I understand the frustration when targets aren’t met, and I genuinely appreciate how you all try to make others understand . It surely has effect on readers and votes do come.
          
          Just a small request — let’s keep the comment section calm and kind. I just had to delete that one comment. I know it came from a place of care, and I truly value that. Hope you understand.
          
          Thank you again, truly. I’m lucky to have you all as my genuine readers..
          

just_billu_readingg

@_Athira no no it's alright ʘ⁠‿⁠ʘ
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_Athira

Thank you for taking it as positive dear⭐️
            Just let me know if you want this message to be deleted from conversation board i understand that
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just_billu_readingg

@_Athira I am sorry author ji, surely will keep that in mind✨
            Lots of love to you and to the story ❤️❤️
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mainteraaa

Hey sorry to disturb but can you please give a chance to my book?
          
          
          Aaradhya Rajvansh had a secret crush on her brother's best friend, Advik Malhotra. Just when feelings were about to bloom, a heartbreaking misunderstanding tore them apart. Believing he loved someone else, Aaradhya left for Canada, carrying a broken heart and finding comfort only in her best friend.
          
          Five years later, she's back-for her brother's wedding and to open a new branch of her company. But fate has other plans. She's forced to stay at his place-yes, Advik's-for one whole month. Alone. Under one roof.
          
          Old sparks. Unspoken feelings. And a chance to finally clear the past.
          
          Because sometimes, love is risky-but worth it.
          
          
          
          Miliye Aaradhya aur Advik se jo ek dusre se ishq toh beintehaa karte hain par aaj tak ek dusre se ye bayaan nahi kar paye.
          
          
          Jahan ishq hai wahan risk toh hoga hi!;)
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/392652557?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_moonverse

AuthorROOH1

Hi Sweetheart, if you are into Desi MULTICOUPLE ROMANCE-COMEDY books then I suggest you give my book a chance. It's packed with Romance, Humour and All the desired tropes of Wattpad readers! At least read the description and I'm sure you'll be hooked on the book from that point onwards!!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/388672184?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=AuthorROOH1

writergirlpoo

forgive me 1131 error.... 
          Please try MY BESTIE'S BROTHER....

          Hridhaya always knew Karthick was bad for her blood pressure-grumpy, arrogant, and permanently stuck in rage mode. But when their families drop the ultimate MARRIAGE bomb and decide they should get married, she realizes she's officially living in her worst nightmare.
          
          HRIDHAYA:

          Marrying Karthick worser than to.....

          ❌ Be buried under a mountain of cockroaches.
          ❌ Watch a three-hour TV serial in slow motion
          ❌Worser than eating soggy pani puri.
          But no. Instead of living my peaceful, Karthick-free life, I'm now stuck in a wedding I never signed up for-with him, Mr Always Angry, cactus Karthick. The man who argues with me like it's his full-time job. The human equivalent of a landmine. The man whose favorite hobby is getting on my nerves.
          This isn't a wedding. This is a hostage situation.

          KARTHICK:
          If someone had told me I'd be married to Hridhaya, I would have laughed in their face. Or screamed. Or maybe jumped into a crocodile-infested river-less painful than this. I hate her
          Because marrying Hridhaya?
          ❌ Using a blunt razor on the face and ending up with battle scars.
          ❌ Worse than being stuck in a never-ending WhatsApp family group.
          ❌  Worse than getting stuck in traffic right before reaching home when you really need to pee.
          She's bossy, loud, and has an answer for everything. And now? She's my wife.
          This is not a marriage. This is a lifetime sentence.
          The Real Problem?
          Between petty sabotage, accidental attraction, and a wedding they never asked for, their battle isn't just about avoiding marriage anymore-it's about surviving it.
          Because the more they fight, the closer they get... and the closer they get, the more dangerous this game becomes.
          Brace yourselves. This isn't just a wedding. It's all-out war. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390508897?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=HopelessRomanticPoo
          

Author_Harmanpreet

Hey,
          
          Sorry to post it here but would you mind giving my story * Harman : Ruined by love* a chance?  It is desi dark romance  story with intense emotions, filled with twists and turns that dive deep into obsession and love. l'd love
          to hear your thoughts if you have some time to check it out. If you checked it out please do let me your thoughts in comment section
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/374426146?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Author_Harmanpreet
          
          Thanks so much! Your support means the world to me!
          

Author_Subha

Hello
          
          How are you? Sorry for spamming your account. If you have time and are interested to read, could you please give me a chance to read my book.. Mr Perfect's Crazy Wife. I would love to hear your thoughts. If you liked it please don't forget to Vote and comment. It means a lot to me. 
          
          Thank you 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/194625013?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Mufasa_My_Hero