linsella

Thank you for voting for The Forbidden Lands, @just_have_to_guess!

linsella

Haha no problem, but advice is always welcome.
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just_have_to_guess

@linsella Oops never mind about the advice. I'd skipped over a line that answered my question. I tend to jump paragraphs when I'm excited! ;)
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just_have_to_guess

@linsella You're totally welcome! It's so good, it should get published someday I think. 
            Can I give advice for the end of chapter 4?
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