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The only thing that I could tell u is that if the narrator is talking or a character is thinking something You could put a * or put the letters in bold to alert the reader more.

I read 3 parts and it has wonderful writing, better then me by alot :p I don't really see any places were it could be worded differently. Very good writing in my opinion

@RedheadKyleyB Could you tell me which one it is maybe it was my fault. Thanks for telling me though

Nvm it's working now I think Wattpad was just being dumb