@justarandomgirlyxx
Chapter 18 has been published! Sorry about the months' wait! I know! I'm really sorry but I hope you enjoy! Please do answer the poll I put up! It helps me see the reader's view of the story and could probably change the way the story goes! Thank you! See you guys later! Bye!(^3^)/
Glad to say chapter 18 is in the making
Chapter 18: Everything's Confusing
Not much to get from now but I might leave a little bit of a teaser later;)
Chapter 7 of an 'Unborn Villain' is no longer under editing and is finished. You can go read or reread it now! Thank you for all the support!
@justarandomgirlyxx I guess I can rest working on my Boxing Sonic fanfic I guess just to read it...
So far I’ve only edited up to chapter 7 but I’m working my way there. Right now it says under construction as I am still working on fixing the povs, tenses, and grammar, so bear with me and it’ll be gone by today and I’ll be on to chapter 8.
So you're probably wondering what I've been up to since my last message. Well, so far I've changed the POVs and tenses of my story. Something bout switching between first and third pov often doesn't really appeal to me. It makes room for lazy writing and that's not for me. I wanna make the experiences of the character good obviously but I don't want to make it seem like the chapter is something they're not either.
That's what I've been up to so far as well as reading along as I make my changes to improve my story's grammar and plot. Thank you all for your support and kindness!
For me to post another chapter of 'An Unborn Villian?' I will have to read the story over again so it matches the previous chapters and makes sense. This might take a while and also mean some of the chapters may be tweaked. Thank you all for your patience and support. I'm glad to say your girl is back in business!
@justarandomgirlyxx Good to see you back in business. So long that I started making my own stories like: 'Robotnik's Blue Son'
Hello, I know I only just started reading ur sonamy story, but I noticed that in ur synopsis, Eggman is using fake chaos emeralds for negative energy, just so u know, normal genuine chaos emeralds hold negative energy as well as positive.
Your reader
In sonicX, when he goes dark, there are no genuine chaos emeralds around, but I'm just saying that he can go dark using genuine chaos emeralds
@Dabest2025 Yh I was a huge fan but I've forgotten most of my facts. Which is a complete shame. I knew in sonic x it was fake chaos emeralds that made him go dark but idk it was also regular ones. But I do know it's in stages! So that's good! Thank you btw!
Also, if u don't know, there's dark sonic, normal sonic with darker fur and a darker personality, then theirs super dark sonic, which is like dark sonic, but with quills pointing upwards, blank eyes and and even darker personality
Heyyyy! How r we? Good? I'm alive, BTW! It's been 2 months, I know, I know but this lazy bitch has been reading shit to keep herself alive, so this is a hello and good night!
Brought another story back to the drawing board. I'll republish it when I deem it good!
3k views is not something 2 joke abt! Thank yous all so much for the 3k views on 'An Unborn Villain'!